The Wonders of Space
The mystery of space2 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Yes so much said in a mere twenty syllables -the vastness of space is simply fascinating and the final line here summarises it so effectively - Maybe include a pic to illustrate.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Yes so much said in a mere twenty syllables -the vastness of space is simply fascinating and the final line here summarises it so effectively - Maybe include a pic to illustrate.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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A lovely review - thank you so much
Best wishes
Comment from Daniel Milton Taylor
Peter, great poem in capturing the vastness of space in such a small space.
I count 21 syllables instead of 20, thus the 4 star rating. I apologize for the rating if I've miscounted. I went over it several times. Take care, Daniel
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Peter, great poem in capturing the vastness of space in such a small space.
I count 21 syllables instead of 20, thus the 4 star rating. I apologize for the rating if I've miscounted. I went over it several times. Take care, Daniel
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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You are quite right there is in indeed 21 syllables. Back to school for me!
Kind regards
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I probably have to go back to school as well because I was having trouble counting to 21, which is probably why I had to do it a few times. Lol