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The Purifying Flame

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "An Anorexic Love Song"
Poems about the experience of healing.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Exceptional
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What a powerful piece about an illness that is so often misunderstood. What a difficult disease to deal with when just existing is a chore and the option to eat feels undeserved. I am happy to have a 6 star for this one. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for reading. I apologize for not responding sooner. I could post, but not reply to reviews while I was in the hospital. Turns out there are downsides to only having a phone.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Excellent
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This shows promise while simultaneously scaring me, because you should want to live for YOU. YOU should want life without being conjoined with anyone else.

I've had this disease. It is beatable. I am just one of hundreds of thousands who have beaten it. I want you to beat it, too. I am sending you so much �� today. Be a bulldozer.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for reading. Trust me, I have lots of reasons to recover, myself included. This one was just focusing on a particularly intense emotion during a certain part of treatment I apologize for not responding sooner. I could post, but not reply to reviews while I was in the hospital. Turns out there are downsides to only having a phone.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 26-Nov-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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Anorexia is such a complex illness as it is about the body and the mind. Having a focus on love and a partner rather than oneself sounds like a distraction that works here. An unusually and pleasing poem with a positive outcome, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for reading. I apologize for not responding sooner. I could post, but not reply to reviews while I was in the hospital. Turns out there are downsides to only having a phone.