God's Children
A poem36 total reviews
Comment from gansach
This is a wonderful poem about the love we receive every minute of every day from Jesus. It's such a comfort to know He is always there~I sure needed that comfort today and felt so much better after talking with Him~and our faith in Him is a great gift. I really needed to read this today. Thank you! (One note--spelling in stanza one, line 7, menu instead of me).
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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This is a wonderful poem about the love we receive every minute of every day from Jesus. It's such a comfort to know He is always there~I sure needed that comfort today and felt so much better after talking with Him~and our faith in Him is a great gift. I really needed to read this today. Thank you! (One note--spelling in stanza one, line 7, menu instead of me).
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
Beautiful poem Roy. Your message of the close relationship we have with our Father/Abba and our brother via adoption is heart warming to read and a joy to remember everyday.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Beautiful poem Roy. Your message of the close relationship we have with our Father/Abba and our brother via adoption is heart warming to read and a joy to remember everyday.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks Janet, for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem expresses the personalized qualities of God and his affection to His children. The rhythm and rhyme is great as always. I like the choice of avant-garde but still traditional artwork, too, for the presentation overall.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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This poem expresses the personalized qualities of God and his affection to His children. The rhythm and rhyme is great as always. I like the choice of avant-garde but still traditional artwork, too, for the presentation overall.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks Crystie, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Roy Another nice poem from you although ai do take you up on line 3,
No fame or special talent
You have both and I am sure your lord loves them
Still in Bali
Cheers Chrisxx
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Hi Roy Another nice poem from you although ai do take you up on line 3,
No fame or special talent
You have both and I am sure your lord loves them
Still in Bali
Cheers Chrisxx
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks Chris for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Nice job! The subject matter nevers fails to inspire! Your words choices are simple yet sublime.I like that style!
Really well written. Good picture nice colors great job! I hope to read more of your work. Have a great night!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Nice job! The subject matter nevers fails to inspire! Your words choices are simple yet sublime.I like that style!
Really well written. Good picture nice colors great job! I hope to read more of your work. Have a great night!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks Lea, for these sage comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
This poem is well-written, Roy. You go into great detail expressing the relationship between a man and God, his creator. The lines flow together well. You complete the story in the last stanza with an eternal note.
Robert
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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This poem is well-written, Roy. You go into great detail expressing the relationship between a man and God, his creator. The lines flow together well. You complete the story in the last stanza with an eternal note.
Robert
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks Robert, for these sage comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Roy,
You've written another stellar story. I love the way this poems flows. A testament of God's love through all of our sin. He gives us free will and never ask for a thing. He knows that through thick or thin he will have our back and we may never know him even when we need him. God is a mighty God, he loves us unconditionally. Another great poem.
Cecilia
Do the poems come easily to you or is it a struggle? Personally, for me I have to have a passioin or I fail.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Roy,
You've written another stellar story. I love the way this poems flows. A testament of God's love through all of our sin. He gives us free will and never ask for a thing. He knows that through thick or thin he will have our back and we may never know him even when we need him. God is a mighty God, he loves us unconditionally. Another great poem.
Cecilia
Do the poems come easily to you or is it a struggle? Personally, for me I have to have a passioin or I fail.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thanks Cecilia for these sage comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome
Comment from Nicki.B
This is beautiful poem of faith and as always Roy presented so professionally with lovely imagery and most of all, the message within is something many readers will relate to. I love that you feel God always has your back is basically your best friend, it's such a lovely thing to have such strong faith and love in God. Well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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This is beautiful poem of faith and as always Roy presented so professionally with lovely imagery and most of all, the message within is something many readers will relate to. I love that you feel God always has your back is basically your best friend, it's such a lovely thing to have such strong faith and love in God. Well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Nicki, for these very kind comments and perceptive review, blessings Roy
Comment from jake cosmos aller
a powerful and moving poem about experiencing God's love through his son Jesus Christ. I don't share your faith or beliefs, but you expressed it very well in this poem.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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a powerful and moving poem about experiencing God's love through his son Jesus Christ. I don't share your faith or beliefs, but you expressed it very well in this poem.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Jake, for these very kind comments and perceptive review, blessings Roy
Comment from mermaids
What a comforting theme, we are always God's child. My parents have passed on as well and it is uplifting to know we still have a parent who cares for us. "god never spurns, yet He loves" is a powerful line that reminds the reader of His love and presence. Excellent faith based poem that is positive and speaks to the reader.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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What a comforting theme, we are always God's child. My parents have passed on as well and it is uplifting to know we still have a parent who cares for us. "god never spurns, yet He loves" is a powerful line that reminds the reader of His love and presence. Excellent faith based poem that is positive and speaks to the reader.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thanks Elaine, for these very kind comments and perceptive review, blessings Roy