Kristine
Her very essence5 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely written poem for the 20 syllable contest, and I wish you the very best you have a lovely weekend and may your week be blessed. God bless you. Patricia.
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This is a nicely written poem for the 20 syllable contest, and I wish you the very best you have a lovely weekend and may your week be blessed. God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
The sense of wonder in your words is terrific. You do a great job of inviting readers to reflect on their own journeys. I love how you share the idea that it's never too late to learn about oneself. Great job!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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The sense of wonder in your words is terrific. You do a great job of inviting readers to reflect on their own journeys. I love how you share the idea that it's never too late to learn about oneself. Great job!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Michael, thank you for the kind words. I've been doing a lot of life reflection lately. You get to a point where you realize there's more time behind you than in front of you, and you start to wonder about your own worth. What makes me ME?
Comment from gansach
This is a great entry for the 20 syllable poem competition. It is a sad truth that it takes us decades of living and experience to finally understand our true selves, who we really are, what we can do and be. The lucky ones realize in time to enjoy it, sadly some never get the chance. Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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This is a great entry for the 20 syllable poem competition. It is a sad truth that it takes us decades of living and experience to finally understand our true selves, who we really are, what we can do and be. The lucky ones realize in time to enjoy it, sadly some never get the chance. Well done!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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I thank you very much for your kind review and understanding of the meaning behind it. Your comment says it all. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Life can be consuming and we often find ourselves doing everyone's bidding and forget who we are and what we want out of life, I can identify with your words here Kristine, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Life can be consuming and we often find ourselves doing everyone's bidding and forget who we are and what we want out of life, I can identify with your words here Kristine, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Dolly, thank you for the review and the support of my reflection. Yeah, more time behind me than in front of me, and I have a whole lifetime of things I still want to explore, just because I can now.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful reflection and realization woven into a contest entry here -- well done! ;) I would suggest, however, that the period at the end is unnecessary (obviously the end) and it takes away from the simplicity of the presented thought in such a simplistic form.... it shouldn't END here, but push the reader to contemplate further... Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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A wonderful reflection and realization woven into a contest entry here -- well done! ;) I would suggest, however, that the period at the end is unnecessary (obviously the end) and it takes away from the simplicity of the presented thought in such a simplistic form.... it shouldn't END here, but push the reader to contemplate further... Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your quick reply. I appreciate your suggestion and will take another look at it.