I Go To Sleep
The line between death and sleep2 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
Death is only a doorway into another realm. Whether it's a dreamless or a blink of the eye. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Death is only a doorway into another realm. Whether it's a dreamless or a blink of the eye. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you :)
Comment from samandlancelot
Hi Sophia,
I like your circular reasoning trying to make sense of your empty days that make you feel like you are already dead, but yet you remember some things that seem unimportant. Where is the importance in your life? Is it only in dying?
Well done!
Patricia
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Hi Sophia,
I like your circular reasoning trying to make sense of your empty days that make you feel like you are already dead, but yet you remember some things that seem unimportant. Where is the importance in your life? Is it only in dying?
Well done!
Patricia
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much!
