Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yes, let's hope that love will overcome the trials and tribulations of war. I know some people who are from Ukraine and their love continues to be strong. Sometimes people even grow stronger through these hard times. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks for reading and sharing zanya

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

One always hopes that love will triumph over war, rather than be buried beneath its rubble. As your image suggests hope is the key to life, and it must not be lost. You only have 16 syllables - can you develp this one a bit for the contest requirements. Maybe even just add, "Hope is life's key" or similar, either at the beginning or the end. Best wishes.
Wendy

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks for reading and sharing zanya

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Hi Zanya,
This is a powerful wish and effective juxtaposition between love and the rubble of war.
I'm counting 16 syllables and you must have exactly 20 syllables so as not to be disqualified from the contest.

Thanks for sharing!
Julie

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Great review zanya

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A poignant post Zanya as many who are caught up in war cling to hope. We hope that love will save the day when it comes to this kind of conflict. There are some heroes left in this world, I enjoyed the sentiment here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks for a great review zanya