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I Love You

My love for God

3 total reviews 
Comment from Teri7
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Daniel, This is a very sweet and beautiful 20 syllable poem you have penned for the contest. You wrote about the One that we should love the most and it seems you do. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024
    Teri, Thank you. He definitely is The One. I never really knew what love was until He showed me.
Comment from papa55mike
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Your poem is beautifully written, but please check your syllable count. You only have 19 syllables. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your review. I will definitely go back and check that syllable count.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This twenty-syllable poem, I Love You, has the proper syllable count and makes that daring announcement that recognizes, accepts, and returns the heart-sprung message.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
    Bill, thank you for your review. I was hoping for this kind of response.