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Defy the Dreadful Darkness

What Universal, Hammer and the zombie apocalypse only half w

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Comment from royowen
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You've written a fine, articulate, free flowing narrative, it's beautifully presented in excellent rhyme, and it tells of some of the best films that ever reached the silver screen, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    Yes, it is pleasing and a paradox to see some of these films being finally recognized for how good they really were and still are. One thing that stands out for me are the musical scores. they are memorable. Is anything today that memorable? i forgot to include the brilliant Invisible Man from 1933. Even my parents and their friends were rapt as they heard Raines and saw flesh and bone just disappear! regards from Gerard.
reply by royowen on 12-Nov-2024
    Yep, they had a little more depth than now,
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Wow... now there's quite the collection of horrific and even hellish visions in word only -- well done with the descriptors in your abab scheme here... Definitely for Halloween! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
    I am truly glad and heartened that you like it . It truly is gratifying and even reassuring to know that the perspiration along with the inspiration (Thank you Tom Edison!) is worthy of a review like this! Warm regards from Gerard.
Comment from gansach
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This poem covers a multitude of Halloween horrors and fears with great and gory descriptive words and makes a wonderful entry for the Halloween Poetry competition. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much. I really tried on this one and I am glad that you like it. Regards from Gerard.
Comment from Cullen T. Bridges
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The flow is fine, and I like the rhyme scheme you chose. You searched for words rather than sticking with simpler choices. Just wonderful work all around!

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Thank you for picking up that error. I really need a secretary. I corrected it. It is the word ferine. I like what you said and I thank you so much for it! regards from Gerard.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Hi Gerard,
What a totally awesome poem. Your words conjure up visions of the dead and what happens when we die. The thought of Hell is possibly this poem. Great job. Keep them coming you have a real talent.

I found one small issue: corpsescrawl and creep as one.-you need a space.

Otherwise, no typos or other errors.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    You are right and I sincerely thank you for that. i corrected it and i thank you for letting me know. i wish I had a secretary. Better yet, if my wife was alive, these annoying little glitches and bleeps would not be happening. Thanks and regards from GK
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 29-Oct-2024
    You're welcome. I'm sorry for your loss. We are all here to help each other out.

    Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    You are very kind and considerate. That is to your credit. Thank You. Gerard.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is so well written. I really enjoyed your word choices like "leather wings and padded paws" and "serpents' sons". You made the creatures of the night come alive in my mind. The The way you build tension with each stanza is masterful. Keep writing! This is a terrific entry to the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Michael, it is always worthwhile to read your reviews as they bring me insight and many times personal satisfaction. Well. Michael, you have done it again. Thank you! Regards from Gerard.
Comment from Jacob1395
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This is definitely a creepy poem and perfect for this time of year. I know there are many people who don't like Halloween, but I've always loved it. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much. If it is unsettling and creepy then I have done my job. I am glad that you liked it! Regards from Gerard.