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2024 Gypsy's Prose

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Comment from Bill Schott
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Here's to Mrs. Whipple, one of the many mostly nameless and faceless teachers who give the profession a shot in the arm by becoming that mentor at the right moment.
There is a saying of when the student is ready the teacher will appear.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much, Bill.
    I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Gypsy,
Your writing is impeccable; your teacher sounds as though she was devoted and went the extra mile with her students.
Great true story.
Blessings,
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊

    Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello Gypsy, this story-in-a-poem is wonderful. Mrs. Whipple taught you well. She showed you the way. I am sure that you will never forget her.

Of special note:
she focused on the things I did well.

(A true teacher, mentor, and inspiration.)

A poem from the heart. This poem made me smile. Well done. Xo.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much 😊
    I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs 😊
    Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I enjoyed reading this club entry and I'm happy you shared it with us. Thank you.

I was the worse critic I had. (We often are.)

It helped me to improve my speaking and writing skills. (I would omit 'to')

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I appreciate your help.

    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my story.

    Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine write, Gypsy....count yourself lucky that she was there to gently coax a talent that only she saw out of you. A great teacher is wonderful to have, just as a terrible one damages your phyche.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Hello, Mike,

    I had my share of bad teachers in catholic school, who gave me nightmares.

    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. 😊

    gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Oh, you were so lucky to find a teacher who encouraged you. I had the opposite experience. A teacher told me I would never make it as a writer and I believe him. Didn't write for twenty years. This was wonderful. Gretchen

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    I had my share of bad teachers in catholic school who gave me nightmares.

    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. 😊

    gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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The Educator in me absolutely LOVES reading stories like this. I love learning of the differences a good teacher has made in a student's life. Did you keep in touch with her?

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    I kept in touch for a while, but life got complicated.

    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. 😊

    gypsy
reply by Rachelle Allen on 22-Oct-2024
    I hear you. Xo
Comment from Neonewman
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This is an incredible piece, Gypsy. I wish I had such a teacher in my school days. I have, however, found them here on FS and have grown exponentially. Thank you for sharing Mrs. Whipple with us, my friend. It has inspired my day.

God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. 😊

    gypsy
reply by Neonewman on 22-Oct-2024
    My pleasure, Gypsy.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-You wrote a very good tribute for Mrs. Whipple.
-What you write can be applicable to a lot
of young women like yourself.
-You are lucky that Mrs. Whipple cared enough
to bring out the best of you and also had
a special writer's group at her home.
-She reminds me of my English teacher
my senior year in high school.
-Thanks for sharing about her.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. 😊

    gypsy
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Oct-2024
    You are welcome.
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I enjoyed reading this story, found it to be well written and relatable. My encouragement came from my English Language teacher, Mrs Mack, and my Spanish teacher Ms. Ramkalawan. I like you theme and the way you presented your story.
RJ

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Hablas Espaņol?

    Thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem. 😊 I appreciate your exceptional six-stars review.

    gypsy
reply by RJ Heritage on 22-Oct-2024
    You're welcome. hablo un poco de espanol.
    RJ