The Poem That Never Ends
A free verse29 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Poem That Never Ends, I find to be aimed at one of three who might cause this endless procession. It is a loved one, God, or love itself. Okay, maybe nature.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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This poem, The Poem That Never Ends, I find to be aimed at one of three who might cause this endless procession. It is a loved one, God, or love itself. Okay, maybe nature.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Bill! Xo
Comment from Jim Wile
What a wonderful romance poem about the one you love who undergirds all of your poetry. The seasons come and go, and you enjoy each one, but they begin and end, unlike your love which is constant and brings out the best within you.
Such a beautiful sentiment, Jess, to the one who inspires you and gives you the spark to express yourself so brilliantly through your poetry.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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What a wonderful romance poem about the one you love who undergirds all of your poetry. The seasons come and go, and you enjoy each one, but they begin and end, unlike your love which is constant and brings out the best within you.
Such a beautiful sentiment, Jess, to the one who inspires you and gives you the spark to express yourself so brilliantly through your poetry.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, Jim, for your wonderful review and kind words! Made my day.
Xo
Jess
Comment from papa55mike
There are many cycles that never seem to end, and what grows old always leads to a new beginning. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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There are many cycles that never seem to end, and what grows old always leads to a new beginning. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Mike! Xo
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This poem is simply beautiful! You capture the seasons with such grace.
The progression from winter's snow to spring's violets was beautiful. Aalmost like watching a landscape change through the window. My favorite is when you describe this person as an everlasting "poem that never ends." Perfect!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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This poem is simply beautiful! You capture the seasons with such grace.
The progression from winter's snow to spring's violets was beautiful. Aalmost like watching a landscape change through the window. My favorite is when you describe this person as an everlasting "poem that never ends." Perfect!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2024
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Aw thank you so much, Michael! That means a lot!
Xo
Comment from AP Apgar
What an excellent poem wit a beautiful picture presentation supporting -
Your poem is very well written - encapsulating the nature of the seasons and each life time as a perpetual circle - the never ending melody of time - nicely done- Alan
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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What an excellent poem wit a beautiful picture presentation supporting -
Your poem is very well written - encapsulating the nature of the seasons and each life time as a perpetual circle - the never ending melody of time - nicely done- Alan
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, Alan! Xo
Comment from gansach
This is a beautiful free verse poem with a lovely image to illustrate your words. I love the construct and composition of the poem, the stanzas, giving it an attractive presentation. It is perfection~well done!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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This is a beautiful free verse poem with a lovely image to illustrate your words. I love the construct and composition of the poem, the stanzas, giving it an attractive presentation. It is perfection~well done!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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That means the world- thank you!! Xoxo
Comment from Gloria ....
A fine free verse this is. The rhythm catches the vagaries of the seasons, and a relationship within words that feel they may come to a conclusion, but in truth never do.
I very much enjoyed this and may we always feel the spark of pen and ink.
Gloria
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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A fine free verse this is. The rhythm catches the vagaries of the seasons, and a relationship within words that feel they may come to a conclusion, but in truth never do.
I very much enjoyed this and may we always feel the spark of pen and ink.
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Gloria, I'm honored. Thank you for your review, I appreciate it so much.
Xo
Jess
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Jess.
-You have written a very good poem
with effective imagery that tells your story.
-I like how you combine the love poem with the seasons.
-I like the image "closed the page on snow."
-I also like the line, "I have written through the seasons."
-Effective transition from that to him being "woven in
each closing stanza, every first."
-Excellent description follows that and a very good concluding verse.
-Very well done.
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Jess.
-You have written a very good poem
with effective imagery that tells your story.
-I like how you combine the love poem with the seasons.
-I like the image "closed the page on snow."
-I also like the line, "I have written through the seasons."
-Effective transition from that to him being "woven in
each closing stanza, every first."
-Excellent description follows that and a very good concluding verse.
-Very well done.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Pam, this means so much. Thank you!
Xoxo
Jess
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You are very welcome, Jess.
Comment from Boogienights
Very beautiful poem. Whoever this was written about is a very lucky person, and you have aptly described how I feel about my husband. I wish I had written this, it touched my heart. :)
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Very beautiful poem. Whoever this was written about is a very lucky person, and you have aptly described how I feel about my husband. I wish I had written this, it touched my heart. :)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Superb, Jess! As ever, your verse is infused with deep emotion that stirs the reader. As the seasons come and go, so your poetry touches on their transience and finds some respite. But what is consistently woven through those changes in life is the loss you bear. The beauty is there but the story is never-ending. A virtual six from me. Thank you for sharing your excellence. Take care Debbie (And congrats on your last contest win! You had me foxed though and I kept coming back to it:))
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Superb, Jess! As ever, your verse is infused with deep emotion that stirs the reader. As the seasons come and go, so your poetry touches on their transience and finds some respite. But what is consistently woven through those changes in life is the loss you bear. The beauty is there but the story is never-ending. A virtual six from me. Thank you for sharing your excellence. Take care Debbie (And congrats on your last contest win! You had me foxed though and I kept coming back to it:))
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Debbie, that means the world. Thank you so much, my friend! Xoxo