Ghostly Butterflies
Contest entry14 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
They are but just a memory here in England as they had their chance to shine and and now it is too cold for them. Yes they have become ghosts that we remember Patricia, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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They are but just a memory here in England as they had their chance to shine and and now it is too cold for them. Yes they have become ghosts that we remember Patricia, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
I love the flow of the poem. The image creates a picture of wonder and mystery as seen in the words, 'ghostly' and 'ethereal'. Well done, Pat for sharing your creative work. Good luck in the contest.
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I love the flow of the poem. The image creates a picture of wonder and mystery as seen in the words, 'ghostly' and 'ethereal'. Well done, Pat for sharing your creative work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. Great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Patricia, This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. Great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from RJ Heritage
This butterfly looks very delicate and angelic and your verses compliment thus quite well. Thanks for sharing this beautiful picture with me. My eyes or vision is really bad today, please excuse any typos.
God blessings
RJ
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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This butterfly looks very delicate and angelic and your verses compliment thus quite well. Thanks for sharing this beautiful picture with me. My eyes or vision is really bad today, please excuse any typos.
God blessings
RJ
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review and because of my vision, I would not complain about somebody else having a problem
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful artwork and presentation, Patricia.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-Good description of the butterflies
with "ghostly" and "ethereal grace."
-A good concluding line.
-A very good entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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-Beautiful artwork and presentation, Patricia.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-Good description of the butterflies
with "ghostly" and "ethereal grace."
-A good concluding line.
-A very good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. I appreciate it very much.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from evilynne
Your butterflies certainly haunt our days and nights, inspiring your lovely poetry as they show the way to heaven. The picture is also beautiful. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Your butterflies certainly haunt our days and nights, inspiring your lovely poetry as they show the way to heaven. The picture is also beautiful. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving such a nice
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I'm sure all butterflies, well all of God's creatures look to the Heaven. Probably the ones who struggle with it are Humans. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I'm sure all butterflies, well all of God's creatures look to the Heaven. Probably the ones who struggle with it are Humans. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your review. Your reviews are always important to me.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Your words paint a beautiful picture of the butterflies; and the picture goes well with your words. I like the use of 'ghostly' and 'ethereal.' They seem to add a bit of mystery to your 5-7-5 poem. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Your words paint a beautiful picture of the butterflies; and the picture goes well with your words. I like the use of 'ghostly' and 'ethereal.' They seem to add a bit of mystery to your 5-7-5 poem. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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As usual, thank you so much for your very nice
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You're welcome. Blessings. Carol
Comment from GWHARGIS
This poem sent shivers through me. I love the fantasy feel to this poem. I could see them and imagine them disappearing as they got closer to heaven. Like angels merging with the clouds. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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This poem sent shivers through me. I love the fantasy feel to this poem. I could see them and imagine them disappearing as they got closer to heaven. Like angels merging with the clouds. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to stop by and review my work and such a nice comment
Comment from papa55mike
I like this poem. Butterflies are hummingbirds are God's perfect creatures created for our joy. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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I like this poem. Butterflies are hummingbirds are God's perfect creatures created for our joy. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it.