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Sealed

This is about using a newly fixed apple press

2 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I enjoyed this vivid scene of those apples being pressed and dripping with juice, a clever post for the contest and I wish you luck and welcome you to the Fanstory community, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 08-Oct-2024
    Thanks for the welcome and nice comment.



    Fresh press

    Crush appl

    Did you notice that the title has a double it tells you how the press was made fresh by the wood being sealed and how the skin of apples seals in the juice.
Comment from Kahlani
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Hi Jewell, welcome to FanStory. I'm a newbie as well, and I love this community. Everyone here is so supportive and willing to share their knowledge and experience. What a valiant effort for your first poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2024

reply by the author on 07-Oct-2024
    Thanks for the comment, would love to see your stab at 2/4/2 poem