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Comment from jim vecchio
This serves the purpose of haiku. Haiku should present a simple emotion and, unlike senryu, should have a component of nature in it. You succeeded in this form.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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This serves the purpose of haiku. Haiku should present a simple emotion and, unlike senryu, should have a component of nature in it. You succeeded in this form.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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many thanks :)
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Keep on writing.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If only it was eternally spring Sarah, I would just love that. Spring and Summer being my favourite seasons. Your poem is uplifting and refreshing, love Dolly x
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If only it was eternally spring Sarah, I would just love that. Spring and Summer being my favourite seasons. Your poem is uplifting and refreshing, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
Comment from Ang Tang
This short poem beautifully evokes a sense of tranquility and timelessness. The imagery of birds singing and a gently flowing river creates a serene, peaceful atmosphere, while the phrase "eternally spring" suggests a moment frozen in perpetual beauty and renewal. Though brief, it captures the simplicity and elegance of nature, inviting the reader to pause and savor the quiet, ongoing rhythm of life. Its simplicity makes it calming and evocative, transporting the reader to a place of peace and continuity.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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This short poem beautifully evokes a sense of tranquility and timelessness. The imagery of birds singing and a gently flowing river creates a serene, peaceful atmosphere, while the phrase "eternally spring" suggests a moment frozen in perpetual beauty and renewal. Though brief, it captures the simplicity and elegance of nature, inviting the reader to pause and savor the quiet, ongoing rhythm of life. Its simplicity makes it calming and evocative, transporting the reader to a place of peace and continuity.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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May thanks for your awesome review, i am so glad you loved my poem,
Best wishes,
Sarah