Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I really enjoyed the faithful concept of your poem here as you suggest we can be blessed by the Heavens here on earth, a magical theme with a deeply meaningful sentiment, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for reading. I apologize for not responding sooner. I could post, but not reply to reviews while I was in the hospital. Turns out there are downsides to only having a phone.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a nicely written free verse poem, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all And I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a wonderful day and a good week. God bless you.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for reading. I apologize for not responding sooner. I could post, but not reply to reviews while I was in the hospital. Turns out there are downsides to only having a phone.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A beautifully thoughtful free verse using the tool of repetition to deliver a timeless message... Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for reading. I apologize for not responding sooner. I could post, but not reply to reviews while I was in the hospital. Turns out there are downsides to only having a phone.

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

I think you are commenting on the complex relationship between human mortals and the heavenly power from above. Your work is well written and conveys your message very well. It was a pleasure reviewing your work. Best of luck in the contest! Evi

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2024

Thank you very much for reading. I apologize for not responding sooner. I could post, but not reply to reviews while I was in the hospital. Turns out there are downsides to only having a phone.