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Patriotism - No Favored Color

20 syllable contest entry

7 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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Amen! How I wish the country as a whole would embrace "patriotism" over democrat, republican or other...

If we started from THERE, perhaps we could have dialogues instead of warring political divisions!

Karenina

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    K

    Amen to your amen!

    M
reply by karenina on 27-Sep-2024
    So...there are at least TWO of us who aren't subscribing to "hate thy neighbor due to their political affiliations"--

    We're on a roll!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
    Touché
Comment from jessizero
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You got the syllable count right for the contest. I liked your message. It is inspiring. Thank you so much for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
    Thanks Jessi. The original picture is more inspiring. It was snapped during the celebration of V-E Day 1945 in Times Square, NYC. It is a once in a lifetime picture. The woman was identified, but the sailor is questionable. They did not have another meeting.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 20 syllable poem, Patriotism No Favored Color, reminds the readers that the flag of the United States flies over all residents and stands for our unity.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Bill,

    Spot on!

    Mark
Comment from pome lover
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but it does favor true, loyal Americans. People who love their country, who are proud to be Americans. People who put hand over heart and say the pledge of allegiance. People who don't burn it.
Katharine

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Katherine,

    THANK YOU for your pledge of allegiance to our country. Your remarks are spot on.

    Mark
reply by pome lover on 24-Sep-2024
    and thank you, Mark!
    Katharine
Comment from RodG
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Mark, with what --44 days until the election--I think many of us are thinking of the country and flag we love. I listen to the Star Spangled Banner played before an NFL game and I get teary-eyed. Thanks for reminding us of all this. Rod

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Rod, Yesi, I too get emotional when they sing that and America, the Beautiful!

    More of us should think what our flag means to all the residents of our great country.

Comment from patcelaw
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I enjoyed this very much. As a red blood in American and one who served in the military, I could not see how anyone could look at the flag and not honor it and honor our country.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    THANK YOU for your service to our country. United we should stand!
    And we all have red blood!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I love this! Unfortunately, a major portion of our country has forgotten this truth. I am praying that after November we can find a way back to this belief. Nice job.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Thanks for crediting my few words! Pleased our belief systems are equal.