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Nativity

No place like home.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Sanku
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Congratulations for achieving the 750 milestone!! You have a talent to say ans convey a strong image through very few lines. The picture is brilliant and the message id precious..

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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750! Congrats! Your poem is beautiful! I love how you share such strong imagery with just a few words. What stood out to me was the "homeless pulsating stars" guiding the way. Loved it. There's a sense of longing and connection in the lines that feels personal. Absolutely lovely!

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Thanks for your wonderful review.
Comment from patcelaw
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Very nice 20 syllable poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest you have boiled down
In 20 syllables the story of the Christmas miracle. Patricia congratulations on the number 750 milestone.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much.