Nativity
No place like home.3 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
Congratulations for achieving the 750 milestone!! You have a talent to say ans convey a strong image through very few lines. The picture is brilliant and the message id precious..
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
Congratulations for achieving the 750 milestone!! You have a talent to say ans convey a strong image through very few lines. The picture is brilliant and the message id precious..
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
750! Congrats! Your poem is beautiful! I love how you share such strong imagery with just a few words. What stood out to me was the "homeless pulsating stars" guiding the way. Loved it. There's a sense of longing and connection in the lines that feels personal. Absolutely lovely!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
750! Congrats! Your poem is beautiful! I love how you share such strong imagery with just a few words. What stood out to me was the "homeless pulsating stars" guiding the way. Loved it. There's a sense of longing and connection in the lines that feels personal. Absolutely lovely!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thanks for your wonderful review.
Comment from patcelaw
Very nice 20 syllable poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest you have boiled down
In 20 syllables the story of the Christmas miracle. Patricia congratulations on the number 750 milestone.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
Very nice 20 syllable poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest you have boiled down
In 20 syllables the story of the Christmas miracle. Patricia congratulations on the number 750 milestone.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much.