Maybe tomorrow
Depression2 total reviews
Comment from Christina Kinney
This poem is a profoundly moving exploration of mental health, capturing the loneliness, exhaustion, and facade of happiness that often accompany such struggles. The poet's raw honesty and vivid imagery bring to life the overwhelming tiredness that sleep can't fix and the fear of reaching out for help. Lines about crying in private, the fear of the Bible's pages, and seeking solace in small signs from God add depth and poignancy.
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This poem is a profoundly moving exploration of mental health, capturing the loneliness, exhaustion, and facade of happiness that often accompany such struggles. The poet's raw honesty and vivid imagery bring to life the overwhelming tiredness that sleep can't fix and the fear of reaching out for help. Lines about crying in private, the fear of the Bible's pages, and seeking solace in small signs from God add depth and poignancy.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your piece deeply captures the isolation and struggle of feeling overwhelmed. The way you describe the disconnection, like staring at your phone and feeling invisible, is incredibly moving. Your depiction of being exhausted beyond what sleep can cure, and crying in private spaces, paints a vivid picture of your emotional pain. The contrast between your outward smile and inner turmoil hits hard, revealing the depth of your loneliness.
Your fears of being too much for others and your longing for true understanding come across with raw honesty. It's powerful how you express the hope for connection and meaning amidst the struggle. Overall, your writing is a heartfelt reflection on the challenges of reaching out and the desire to be seen and understood.I believe many will relate to this. I know I do.
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Your piece deeply captures the isolation and struggle of feeling overwhelmed. The way you describe the disconnection, like staring at your phone and feeling invisible, is incredibly moving. Your depiction of being exhausted beyond what sleep can cure, and crying in private spaces, paints a vivid picture of your emotional pain. The contrast between your outward smile and inner turmoil hits hard, revealing the depth of your loneliness.
Your fears of being too much for others and your longing for true understanding come across with raw honesty. It's powerful how you express the hope for connection and meaning amidst the struggle. Overall, your writing is a heartfelt reflection on the challenges of reaching out and the desire to be seen and understood.I believe many will relate to this. I know I do.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
