Show Me
actions speak louder than words8 total reviews
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
I really enjoyed this poem, it's really how I feel also! Talk is cheap! So many times I have watched people making promises to do something and I will be thinking, you have no intention of actually doing it! And thinking that I want to make a concerted effort to never be like that! Great post! Maddy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
  |
I really enjoyed this poem, it's really how I feel also! Talk is cheap! So many times I have watched people making promises to do something and I will be thinking, you have no intention of actually doing it! And thinking that I want to make a concerted effort to never be like that! Great post! Maddy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
-
Thank you so very much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-syllable poem, Show Me, has the proper syllable count and identifies the missing piece to passing on processes, and skills -- mentors.....
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
|
This twenty-syllable poem, Show Me, has the proper syllable count and identifies the missing piece to passing on processes, and skills -- mentors.....
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
-
Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Colorado Owl
Very well done, and an excellent reminder for all of us. In this year of elections, it reminds me of all the promises we're hearing from both sides of every issue. Thank you, and congratulations on your high rank in writing and poetry!
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
|
Very well done, and an excellent reminder for all of us. In this year of elections, it reminds me of all the promises we're hearing from both sides of every issue. Thank you, and congratulations on your high rank in writing and poetry!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
-
Thanks so much, I appreciate it!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Wow, you nailed it with this one - a perfect entry for the 20 syllable poem. You made every word count in meaning and the rhyme just adds punch. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
 |
Wow, you nailed it with this one - a perfect entry for the 20 syllable poem. You made every word count in meaning and the rhyme just adds punch. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
-
Thank you so much for your generous review.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 20 Syllable Poem contest. I have always needed to live by those words because when someone tries to explain how to do something I simply can't understand unless they are showing me. I used to study in a similar way. I would read out loud and also write down what I was reading so that it would get into my head. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
|
An excellent entry for the 20 Syllable Poem contest. I have always needed to live by those words because when someone tries to explain how to do something I simply can't understand unless they are showing me. I used to study in a similar way. I would read out loud and also write down what I was reading so that it would get into my head. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
-
Thank you so much!
Comment from Samantha Wymer
This is absolute right that actions speak louder than words. You can say this, but it don't mean a thing if you don't follow though. I wish I could give you a six star but I'm out. This poem is wonderful and holds a strong meaning. Thank you.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
|
This is absolute right that actions speak louder than words. You can say this, but it don't mean a thing if you don't follow though. I wish I could give you a six star but I'm out. This poem is wonderful and holds a strong meaning. Thank you.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
-
Thank you so much, I appreciate it!
-
anytime
-
Your very welcome.
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written for the 20 syllable contest and I wish you the very best with the contest. Your advice in this particular 20 syllables is very prudent for all of us to follow. Our actions speak louder than our words sometimes. Patricia.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
|
This is very nicely written for the 20 syllable contest and I wish you the very best with the contest. Your advice in this particular 20 syllables is very prudent for all of us to follow. Our actions speak louder than our words sometimes. Patricia.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
-
Thank you so much, Patricia!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
No "do as I say, not as I do" here, I see!! Very wise and well-executed twenty-syllable poem here, Gail. I bet it will do very well for you in the contest. I will be looking for your name in the Winner's Circle!! good luck to you! xoxox
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
|
No "do as I say, not as I do" here, I see!! Very wise and well-executed twenty-syllable poem here, Gail. I bet it will do very well for you in the contest. I will be looking for your name in the Winner's Circle!! good luck to you! xoxox
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
-
Thank you so much, Rachelle!