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Unheard Thunder

When there's silence it can seem like you're deaf.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Good twist :"Agreement on Internal Trade, Chapter Five - Procurement - Article 507 - Non-Application Article 507: Non-Application

This Chapter does not apply to:

(a) procurement of goods intended for resale to the public;

(b) procurement of goods, services or construction:

(i) purchased on behalf of an entity not covered by this Chapter; or

(ii) purchased by entities which operate sporting or convention facilities in order to comply with a commercial agreement with an entity not covered by this Chapter that contains provisions incompatible with this Chapter;

(c) procurement from philanthropic institutions, prison labour or persons with disabilities;

(d) procurement contracts with a public body or a non-profit organization;

(e) procurement of:
(i) goods purchased for representational or promotional purposes; or

(ii) services or construction purchased for representational or promotional purposes outside the territory of a Party; and

(f) procurement of any goods the interprovincial movement of which is restricted by laws not inconsistent with this Agreement.
" of the concepts. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to review my poem . I appreciate your comments.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very nice LUN poem and I wish you the very best in the contest that you have a lovely day and you have an extremely nice weekend and may God bless you with good things. Patricia .J

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
    I appreciate your kind words in reviewing my poem. Thank you for the well wishes and may you have a wonderful weekend yourself.
Comment from Sally Law
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So true and beautifully written and presented in lune poetry form. A magnificent offering, my friend. My best for the upcoming contest too. I'll be watching.
Sal xoxo's

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Sally. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I'll certainly need the well wishes.
Comment from jessizero
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I think this is a great entry for the lune poetry contest. You got the syllable count right, and your message was impactful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
    I really appreciate your review. Thank you for your comments. As for your best wishes I'll definitely need them.