Everchanging Perspective
A lune for the contest4 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
This is a very nice idea for this contest entry.
Your author note and artwork just add to its overall appeal.
Connection with kaleidoscope and dragonfly is great.
Mark
P.S. Might consider adding a dash or squiggle after your first line, which IMHO sets off your two concluding lines.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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June,
This is a very nice idea for this contest entry.
Your author note and artwork just add to its overall appeal.
Connection with kaleidoscope and dragonfly is great.
Mark
P.S. Might consider adding a dash or squiggle after your first line, which IMHO sets off your two concluding lines.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Good suggestion!
Comment from lyenochka
How cool! No wonder the dragonflies in such odd movements. And bees and flies have such interesting eyes, too. I can't imagine viewing the world like that. And bees see in UV - such a different world for them! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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How cool! No wonder the dragonflies in such odd movements. And bees and flies have such interesting eyes, too. I can't imagine viewing the world like that. And bees see in UV - such a different world for them! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Sometimes in life we need to shift focus in order to get a new perspective. A dragonfly can do it much more easily! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from patcelaw
The eye of the dragonfly must be something specifically designed by God for his reasons and he gave it to the dragonfly. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. By the way, I'd love kaleidoscopes I have one that has stayed glass in it and it's just beautiful. Patricia .
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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The eye of the dragonfly must be something specifically designed by God for his reasons and he gave it to the dragonfly. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. By the way, I'd love kaleidoscopes I have one that has stayed glass in it and it's just beautiful. Patricia .
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Sometimes in life we need to shift focus in order to get a new perspective. A dragonfly can do it much more easily! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune poem, Kaleidoscope Eyes, has the proper formatting and defines the dragonflies' visual acuity as something most easily compared to a kaleidoscope.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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This lune poem, Kaleidoscope Eyes, has the proper formatting and defines the dragonflies' visual acuity as something most easily compared to a kaleidoscope.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Sometimes in life we need to shift focus in order to get a new perspective. A dragonfly can do it much more easily! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated!
