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Tribute to Debi & Glen Marquette

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Roadrunner, Glen and Debi"
Happy 50th Wedding Anniversary!

31 total reviews 
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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Hello my dear friend, I am just coming around after a rough night. (Just kinda hard to go for so many hours) but as promised, here I am and happy to finally review this awesome poem. I saved all of my initial feelings to have them in the reviews, so here goes and thanks again, Terry!

Terry, there is a dang good reason you haven't gotten a review from me yet on this. I can't stop reading and loving it and I can't give it a five. So this is my review until Sunday when I come back with a six. We will treasure this always. I love the roadrunner and the green color that you used. And I absolutely loved the whole thing. You are a poet and you have deeply honored both of us and I hope you know how touched I am. A little shy with all of this, or overwhelmed but certainly loved it. So thank you again, our wonderful friend. You are the greatest, Terry. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Love, Debi

 Comment Written 19-May-2024


reply by the author on 19-May-2024
    Beep! Beep!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this tribute to Debi and Glen on their Golden Anniversary. I enjoyed reading. You did a great job writing it. It was light and fun to read.

 Comment Written 17-May-2024


reply by the author on 17-May-2024
    Barbara, thank you, as you know, I'm not much of a poet, but I had fun writing the tribute to Debi and Glen. Terry.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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- Nice image and presentation, Terry.
-You did a good job with your poem.
-I like the style with He said, She said.
-I like the verse about the smile and
asking about her name.
-You capture the essence of Debi's
love of that car and driving it very well,
along with Glen's words of caution,
and she agreed.
-Very good closing verses about
the two of them and their dreams
for their relationship which has
made it to a remarkable fifty years together.
-Very well done.
-

 Comment Written 17-May-2024


reply by the author on 17-May-2024
    Thank you for reading, Pam. I'm not much of poet, but it was fun writing about Debi and Glen. Terry.
reply by Pam (respa) on 17-May-2024
    You are welcome, Terry, and you did a good job with the poem. I'm sure Debi and Glen are appreciating them.
Comment from bob cullen
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This is so good and a great tribute to a couple who are celebrating a fantastic milestone. So very nice of you to offer this to a fellow Fanstorian.
You too deserved to be celebrated.

 Comment Written 17-May-2024


reply by the author on 17-May-2024
    Bob, thank you for reading and for your review and kind words. Terry.
Comment from gansach
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A succinct and sweet history of the love story of Glen and Debi to celebrate their 50th Anniversary. I like the construct of this poem. It is very enjoyable to read.

 Comment Written 17-May-2024


reply by the author on 17-May-2024
    Thank you very much for reading and for your review. Terry.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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A great tribute in honor of our friend Debi and her hubby of fifty years, Glen! Wishing them the most special celebration on this anniversary and many years of health and happiness to come.

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 17-May-2024
    Marilyn, Thank you for your review, and joining the party for Debi and Glen. Terry.
Comment from royowen
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A cleverly disguised but still clearly a Terry Broxson tribute. Just love it. You're one of the most recognisable writers onsite my friend, the honoured couple will be pleased by this great write. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Roy, thank you for the kind words from a real poet! Terry.
reply by royowen on 16-May-2024
    Bless you
reply by royowen on 16-May-2024
    Bless you
reply by royowen on 16-May-2024
    Bless you
reply by royowen on 16-May-2024
    Bless you
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Terry,
This is a fast moving poem with its short lines of rhyming somewhat romantic conversation about the start of the relationship. It has lasted the 50 Debi asked for. Glen will also get his many more.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Joan, thank you, I'm not much of a poet, but I wanted to honor Debi and Glen. Terry.
Comment from Ulla
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Wonderful, no indeed, fifty years is not nearly enough. But where do all the years go? We will never really know. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. Ulla,:)))

 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Ulla, a good question. I don't know. LOL. Thank you for reading. Terry.
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Terry, your poem is heartfelt and so very sweet. I especially liked:

Although nifty fifty is good stuff,
Darling, it's not nearly enough.

(Ahhh)

I love the green background. The same color as the "car."

Well done. A fun poem. Cute photo choice. Well done. M



 Comment Written 16-May-2024


reply by the author on 16-May-2024
    Margaret, Thanks for reading. As you know I'm not much of a poet, but I did have some fun with this one. Terry.