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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, this poem is so cute. I bet that elephant is heavy in thought.
Well-chosen photo. Beautiful presentation. This poem made me smile.
Xo. M
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Hi Gypsy, this poem is so cute. I bet that elephant is heavy in thought.
Well-chosen photo. Beautiful presentation. This poem made me smile.
Xo. M
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from mermaids
There is a feel of fantasy in your words. I like the image of the little elephant "contemplating the crescent moon". I can see an elephant doing this, they are so smart. You also have a light feel and flow to your words that takes the reader to another place.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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There is a feel of fantasy in your words. I like the image of the little elephant "contemplating the crescent moon". I can see an elephant doing this, they are so smart. You also have a light feel and flow to your words that takes the reader to another place.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I would love to sit by this little elephant and listen to his thoughts. I positive they'd be interesting to hear. Thank you for sharing this fun poem with us.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I would love to sit by this little elephant and listen to his thoughts. I positive they'd be interesting to hear. Thank you for sharing this fun poem with us.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Goff
Cute, my friend. Very cute! I do love animals. They are a girt from God.
I wish we, mankind, would work together to better preserve the species becoming extinct. Elephants are one that is in danger.
D
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Cute, my friend. Very cute! I do love animals. They are a girt from God.
I wish we, mankind, would work together to better preserve the species becoming extinct. Elephants are one that is in danger.
D
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery
create a good word picture of the scene.
-We can imagine the little elephant looking
up at the crescent moon and wondering about
what it all means.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery
create a good word picture of the scene.
-We can imagine the little elephant looking
up at the crescent moon and wondering about
what it all means.
-Well done.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome.
Comment from tfawcus
I had to read this one! Let's hope that's how Abhamaru ends up. Beautifully presented. A poem that's simple on the surface but holds a hint at the need for conservation and kindness.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I had to read this one! Let's hope that's how Abhamaru ends up. Beautifully presented. A poem that's simple on the surface but holds a hint at the need for conservation and kindness.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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It's true,
Comment from royowen
I think that's really great a small elephant looking at the moon an contemplating life the time and the wonders of the universe, that's a wonderful ambition, for an elephant, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I think that's really great a small elephant looking at the moon an contemplating life the time and the wonders of the universe, that's a wonderful ambition, for an elephant, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
What a magnificently gorgeous picture. Your words blend with the artwork in a grand way. I think he is dreaming of walking in the jungle with his momma and roasted peanuts. Karen
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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What a magnificently gorgeous picture. Your words blend with the artwork in a grand way. I think he is dreaming of walking in the jungle with his momma and roasted peanuts. Karen
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
Well now, this was absolutely adorable. The Little elephant seems to be contemplating life in general. I liked how this seemed so simple and almost child like, but could be much deeper. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Well now, this was absolutely adorable. The Little elephant seems to be contemplating life in general. I liked how this seemed so simple and almost child like, but could be much deeper. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aw cute! i like the between little and heavy
great imagery and smooth flow
cool pic, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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aw cute! i like the between little and heavy
great imagery and smooth flow
cool pic, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs