Summer Drawing Near
I can't wait for summer and the pool2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a great lune poem. You got the syllable count right, and I liked your rhymes (even though the weren't required). You've made me want to go swimming! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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This was a great lune poem. You got the syllable count right, and I liked your rhymes (even though the weren't required). You've made me want to go swimming! Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thanks. I can't wait to go swimming. I am so looking forward to it.
Comment from mermaids
You have a strong steady beat in your words. I too, await the arrival of summer. Your rhyming words pool, school and cool add to the strength of your theme.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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You have a strong steady beat in your words. I too, await the arrival of summer. Your rhyming words pool, school and cool add to the strength of your theme.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! I can't wait to get into that pool this summer.
