Wedding Day
6-Word Poem6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Andrea,
This is a sad poem about a broken engagement. The artwork and words match well.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful day.
Joan
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Hi Andrea,
This is a sad poem about a broken engagement. The artwork and words match well.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful day.
Joan
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your feedback and review.
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You are most kindly welcome, Andrea.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am guessing for some reason we know nothing about that this wedding was called off. The invitations not sent and the dress yellowed. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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I am guessing for some reason we know nothing about that this wedding was called off. The invitations not sent and the dress yellowed. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I would suggest "Unwedding Day." Also, I can offer suggestions for free pictures. Bing, Google, Unsplash, and Pinterest ( the biggest) allow free use of pictures if you acknowledge them in your Author's notes.
Good Luck. Karen
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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I would suggest "Unwedding Day." Also, I can offer suggestions for free pictures. Bing, Google, Unsplash, and Pinterest ( the biggest) allow free use of pictures if you acknowledge them in your Author's notes.
Good Luck. Karen
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and for your suggestions.
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:-)
Comment from jim vecchio
You told a sad tale and gave us much to ponder with such few words. Hope this is a fiction piece-wouldn't want to see you that unhappy! You are very good at short writings.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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You told a sad tale and gave us much to ponder with such few words. Hope this is a fiction piece-wouldn't want to see you that unhappy! You are very good at short writings.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
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I admire your works.
Comment from Debra White
Hello Andrea :)
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is so well written.
I love the clear imagery of the white dress yellowing over time and the pile of unsent invitations... I'm sure that both will be sat on my back burner for a good while, whilst I think about the back story! Why happened to prevent the wedding from taking place??! It's up to me to decide, I guess!
Your words really hooked me.
Good luck in the contest - a sure fire contender!
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Hello Andrea :)
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is so well written.
I love the clear imagery of the white dress yellowing over time and the pile of unsent invitations... I'm sure that both will be sat on my back burner for a good while, whilst I think about the back story! Why happened to prevent the wedding from taking place??! It's up to me to decide, I guess!
Your words really hooked me.
Good luck in the contest - a sure fire contender!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback. I'm overwhelmed with your review. I'm glad I was able to trigger an emotional reaction.
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You're welcome :)
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is amazing. I gave someone 2 stars for putting a line of writing up for review and calling it poetry. I showed him what one line of poetry should look like. I could have included this in those examples this is a master class. I wish I had 6 stars left, I write more than 100 reviews a week and simply run out.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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That is amazing. I gave someone 2 stars for putting a line of writing up for review and calling it poetry. I showed him what one line of poetry should look like. I could have included this in those examples this is a master class. I wish I had 6 stars left, I write more than 100 reviews a week and simply run out.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your review and feedback. I am in a place with my writing where your feedback has breathed new life into me to continue working at it. I'm just at a tough spot in one story, nothing major except I have so much I need to "fix".
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All the best with it.
