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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Often when we have mountain top experience satan will work doubly hard to bring us done. But God will remain by our side. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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love this one!
great imagery of standing on a mountain top
and letting the wind carry away your problems...
very positive and uplifting -
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I like the analogy that the Haiku presents between humans, nature and God. We do indeed are powerless in the Almighty Stanley of our God

Well said and expressed.
RJ

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, what it is about being at the top of a mountain? We feel so close to God and the heavens. Of special note:

my fears cower
at God's feet --
I let them go

(Good imagery and sensory appeal)

Well chosen photo. Xo. Margaret


 Comment Written 09-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I could see two different scenarios. One, going up to the peak of the mountain and letting go of your fears and troubles. The other was going up and just letting go. Falling. Both were spiritual in a sense. I love the idea of it being at the feet of God. Gretchen

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
    I read it again and realize it was confusing. I rewrote it....

    on the mountain top,

    my fears cower

          at God's feet ?
    Much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy
    I let them go


    Thank you very
Comment from lyenochka
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It's best to just let go of our fears. If we hold on to our fears and worries, they can take us over and we can't release them to God. I like that the fears themselves are cowering before God Who can handle all our fears.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister. I went back and realize it was a little confusing...I changed it....

    on the mountain top,
    my fears cower
    at God's feet ?
    I let them go

    Love,

    Marival