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Comment from teafor2
Gypsy, inference from title, picture, theme, tone and text indicates nothing
good to read about here...Scribe in this melancholic write expounds in raw
candid details and a graphic simile (hurt like a dagger through the chest). I
only hope writing your "hurt heart" out, some purge will take place or even
began a healing or may be a catharsis. teafor2
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Gypsy, inference from title, picture, theme, tone and text indicates nothing
good to read about here...Scribe in this melancholic write expounds in raw
candid details and a graphic simile (hurt like a dagger through the chest). I
only hope writing your "hurt heart" out, some purge will take place or even
began a healing or may be a catharsis. teafor2
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Teafor2
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cedar
Hello Gypsy,
I totally agree that having a heartache or heartbreak is one of the most painful things a human-being will experience in their lifetime. Whether it's from a lost lover, a broken marriage or losing a dear loved one that passes away. I've had many in my lifetime and it seems they get worse every time.
Happy Easter...Bill
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Hello Gypsy,
I totally agree that having a heartache or heartbreak is one of the most painful things a human-being will experience in their lifetime. Whether it's from a lost lover, a broken marriage or losing a dear loved one that passes away. I've had many in my lifetime and it seems they get worse every time.
Happy Easter...Bill
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Heartache is an emotion that lasts for a lifetime. When you are alone, you must sit, and look at the lingering moon; you'll feel the rewards are a bit lonelier. That's when you seek a different direction for loneliness.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Heartache is an emotion that lasts for a lifetime. When you are alone, you must sit, and look at the lingering moon; you'll feel the rewards are a bit lonelier. That's when you seek a different direction for loneliness.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy hugs
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I'm wondering if you're referring to Barbara Streisand.
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No
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A beautiful free verse poem that puts words to what heartache feels like. The presentation is so well-crafted. It adds even more depth to the poem as we see the colors change along with the words. Very well-written. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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A beautiful free verse poem that puts words to what heartache feels like. The presentation is so well-crafted. It adds even more depth to the poem as we see the colors change along with the words. Very well-written. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from jessizero
I know how it feels when the heart breaks, too, and you did a great job of describing it here. I like that you also included the poem in plain black. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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I know how it feels when the heart breaks, too, and you did a great job of describing it here. I like that you also included the poem in plain black. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy...boy is it ever true. The first time I ever fell in love, just out of high school, when she didn't feel the same, the depths of my depression scared me so bad I vowed never to let myself feel that way again, and I never did, even the breakup of my marriage didn't cause me that much emotional pain
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy...boy is it ever true. The first time I ever fell in love, just out of high school, when she didn't feel the same, the depths of my depression scared me so bad I vowed never to let myself feel that way again, and I never did, even the breakup of my marriage didn't cause me that much emotional pain
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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The first cut is the deepest. I still remember my first lovew he. I wonder how is he doing
is doing
Comment from shelley kaye
yup... that's love... pain and joy rolled into one tight ball... b o u n c i n g all over the place... lol
great poem of lost love with nice imagery
cool pics and colours, too!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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yup... that's love... pain and joy rolled into one tight ball... b o u n c i n g all over the place... lol
great poem of lost love with nice imagery
cool pics and colours, too!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is well written and very clearly expressed. The colors of its font bring a sad and lonely atmosphere that is otherwise not associated with reds and even gold or yellow. This in my humble opinion, shows creativity and works very well.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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This is well written and very clearly expressed. The colors of its font bring a sad and lonely atmosphere that is otherwise not associated with reds and even gold or yellow. This in my humble opinion, shows creativity and works very well.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Wow, this is a powerful poem. Recently, I felt the pain of a broken heart. The way you described it is how I felt. The words show the agony of a broken heart. The pictures are great for your poem. Great job.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Wow, this is a powerful poem. Recently, I felt the pain of a broken heart. The way you described it is how I felt. The words show the agony of a broken heart. The pictures are great for your poem. Great job.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Brenda.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is great. Everything has been thought about and work well. I particularly like the use of changing colour throughout. You might want to look at your black font version as it has gone crazy: it does hurtÃ???Ã??Ã? like a dagger.
Many thanks, I have a lot to learn.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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That is great. Everything has been thought about and work well. I particularly like the use of changing colour throughout. You might want to look at your black font version as it has gone crazy: it does hurtÃ???Ã??Ã? like a dagger.
Many thanks, I have a lot to learn.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark. Fixed it, thanks.
Gypsy hugs
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It was very thoughtful of you to share a black font version, pleased to help.