Living On The Edge
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Living On The Edge - Chap 20"The blending of good and evil.
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I can see why it didn't quite end. Troy was the most abused by his brother and he needs to know just what happened and if Alyssa can love him. I have so enjoyed this story. It should be a published book.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I can see why it didn't quite end. Troy was the most abused by his brother and he needs to know just what happened and if Alyssa can love him. I have so enjoyed this story. It should be a published book.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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My apologies, Crol for being so far behind on responding. I've been wrapped up in a new story idea and getting ready to travel to my great granddaughter for Easter. I do appreciate your continued support and all the time spent reading my story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray! They are all together now. And it's natural that theri close sisterhood would jolt Alyssa's memory. And it seems the love that's grown between the two couples will overcome all the misunderstandings.
I'm so glad that Harrison is found guilty and out of commision.
A very satisfying denouement. I think things will wrap up well.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Hooray! They are all together now. And it's natural that theri close sisterhood would jolt Alyssa's memory. And it seems the love that's grown between the two couples will overcome all the misunderstandings.
I'm so glad that Harrison is found guilty and out of commision.
A very satisfying denouement. I think things will wrap up well.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Hi, Helen...hope your traveling is going well. I have been wrapped up in a new story idea, getting ready to travel myself, and cleaning my neglected house. LOL Thanks so much...Love ya, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, this can go really bad or really good. I'm hoping with Layla there, Alyssa will keep her anger at bay until everything is explained. I'm glad Troy told her before her memory came back. Garth is my hero!!!
I wasn't sure of who I was looking for, I guess I was hoping for him to find me. (I would omit 'of', I stumbled reading it.)
Layla's eyes sparkled as she laughed, "Mine too!" (laughed.)
Jake nodded, "Yes, she will, but there's (nodded.)
Jake sighed, "There's more. If Alyssa remembers you, (sighed.)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Okay, this can go really bad or really good. I'm hoping with Layla there, Alyssa will keep her anger at bay until everything is explained. I'm glad Troy told her before her memory came back. Garth is my hero!!!
I wasn't sure of who I was looking for, I guess I was hoping for him to find me. (I would omit 'of', I stumbled reading it.)
Layla's eyes sparkled as she laughed, "Mine too!" (laughed.)
Jake nodded, "Yes, she will, but there's (nodded.)
Jake sighed, "There's more. If Alyssa remembers you, (sighed.)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Fixed and thank you! Those darn commas and periods will be the death of me! Thanks for enjoying the story and helping me out all the time. I couldn't get it right without you.
Smiles, Carol
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you're doing great.
Comment from LJbutterfly
I admire the endless days, nights, and hours you have spent crafting this literary masterpiece in less than a month. I'm sure you are exhausted from all the obvious thought, work, and research you have put into this project, and you should be proud of your accomplishment.
You have given us mystery, suspense, action, and romance, and have neatly tied up all the loose ends.
For me, this has been an exhilarating and enjoyable experience. I look forward to the final chapter.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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I admire the endless days, nights, and hours you have spent crafting this literary masterpiece in less than a month. I'm sure you are exhausted from all the obvious thought, work, and research you have put into this project, and you should be proud of your accomplishment.
You have given us mystery, suspense, action, and romance, and have neatly tied up all the loose ends.
For me, this has been an exhilarating and enjoyable experience. I look forward to the final chapter.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Making me happy, Lorraine. Smiling from ear to ear! I am thrilled that you loved this chapter and graced me with the stars. It was a big job, but one of joy, especially when friends get excited about what I write. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, Alyssa knows the real Troy, not the one she was led to believe was a murderer. I loved how the scene went with Richard! That was brilliant, he will be going to prison for sure, and I bet there are a lot of prisoners who have a gripe against him. His stay should be quite exciting! Lol!
I'm off to read the final chapter now, my clever friend. This has to be a winner!! Love you lots, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Aww, Alyssa knows the real Troy, not the one she was led to believe was a murderer. I loved how the scene went with Richard! That was brilliant, he will be going to prison for sure, and I bet there are a lot of prisoners who have a gripe against him. His stay should be quite exciting! Lol!
I'm off to read the final chapter now, my clever friend. This has to be a winner!! Love you lots, Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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I am quite giddy this morning...been up since 3am wondering what people would think of the final two chapters. I feel validated...I can write again. It's the best feeling.... Thank you as always for always supporting me and encouraging me to write again. You're the best!
Smiles, hugs and love to you, my friend....
Always, Carol
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So can we have another one!!??????? I loved the ending. xx 🥰🥰🥰
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That's funny! I am sitting here toying with a thought that came to me this morning... it's kind of out of my realm (more you than me) but I'm tossing ideas around already.
How about murder, wrong bodies in caskets, strange inheritance, and maybe a ghost or two. Not sure if I can pull of the ghosts.
Smiles and much love, Carol
Comment from Terry Broxson
Carol that is a great last line for this chapter. I can see you wrapping it in a nice fashion in the next chapter. I think you have done very well. I look forward to finishing the book. Terry
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Carol that is a great last line for this chapter. I can see you wrapping it in a nice fashion in the next chapter. I think you have done very well. I look forward to finishing the book. Terry
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thanks for all your support and the reviews, Terry. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry
Keep it up, I am glad it took more than nineteen. It would have been incredibly rushed.I like all the boxes checked. you are doing so. Thank you. Karen :-)
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Keep it up, I am glad it took more than nineteen. It would have been incredibly rushed.I like all the boxes checked. you are doing so. Thank you. Karen :-)
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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I agree! Never would all of this fit into one chapter....I am glad you enjoyed it and appreciate your kind thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
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Amazing work. Karen
Comment from Wendy G
This chapter was wonderful. Full of drama and excitement. The chief has lost all self- control and his blustering and angry indignation show him up for the vile person he is. The romances will turn out well, and A will get her memory back fully, I am sure, and it will end well with Troy. Which one of the tattooed five was responsible for the death of Alyssa's friend? Was it the one Layla killed? Your book is almost done and you have completed it with days to spare! Outstanding.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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This chapter was wonderful. Full of drama and excitement. The chief has lost all self- control and his blustering and angry indignation show him up for the vile person he is. The romances will turn out well, and A will get her memory back fully, I am sure, and it will end well with Troy. Which one of the tattooed five was responsible for the death of Alyssa's friend? Was it the one Layla killed? Your book is almost done and you have completed it with days to spare! Outstanding.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Good morning, Wendy
What a wonderful kindness to start my day with. Thank you! I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. I posted the last chapter a few minutes ago. I hope all your questions are answered.
As always a big hug and thank you...
Carol
Comment from karenina
Bravo! What a tour de force! Harrison couldn't keep it together for ten minutes and it's a relief to know we can put a fork in him--he's done!
And the romances!
You have magic in your "quill" to write this penultimate chapter.
One more to go?
You should be VERY proud!
This is outstanding!
Karenina
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Bravo! What a tour de force! Harrison couldn't keep it together for ten minutes and it's a relief to know we can put a fork in him--he's done!
And the romances!
You have magic in your "quill" to write this penultimate chapter.
One more to go?
You should be VERY proud!
This is outstanding!
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Good morning, my sweet friend,
Well, it's a wrap! Posted the final chapter... now to see if I wrapped it up as well as some had hoped. You always put a smile on my face with your reviews. Thank you so much.
Big hugs as always, Love ya, Carol
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Oh yay! I'm off to read it now!
Comment from Teri7
Carol, This is a really great chapter you have penned. You used very good descriptive words full of lots of excitement. I can't wait to read more! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Carol, This is a really great chapter you have penned. You used very good descriptive words full of lots of excitement. I can't wait to read more! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Teri!
I'm smiling because you have been so thoughtful and I appreciate it so much. Just posted the final chapter and hope it suits what everyone was hoping for.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You are so welcome Carol. I will look for that! love and blessings, Teri
