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Comment from Liz O'Neill
You've done a great job is your internal rhyme. You may not know what that does to the reader listening to the sounds when the internal line also rhymes.
You've brought out a point that everyone can identify with:"A couple friends would turn on Him"
nicely written.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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You've done a great job is your internal rhyme. You may not know what that does to the reader listening to the sounds when the internal line also rhymes.
You've brought out a point that everyone can identify with:"A couple friends would turn on Him"
nicely written.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Awe Liz, thank you so very much for reviewing my Easter poem. You are so very kind and I appreciate you so very much my dear friend. Thanks from the bottom of my heart, my dear friend. Love, Debi
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***Warm hugs***
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Right backatcha Sweetie!
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My next post is going to be about my terrible terrible terrible being scammed. How about my books about my contract about everything. I'll go
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OMGosh, Liz, NO, they did that to you after you were so excited for this. When are you posting???
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As soon as I can get it written. It will eventually be part of my autobiography anyway, so I'll just do it along with my autobiography post that I've been doing but the main time I've got to be calling the different people to tell them we changed my checking account number. a pretty terrible pretty terrible experience and when I was calling my social security office I dialed the old number I didn't know they changed and I got someone wanting to sell me something and give me a give me a and she kept saying she was going toForward me to my office and then I said we'll do it please and I was being very snarly whether she was going to do that as soon as we finish this conversation and then I told hermy stuff and she said oh well I will give you a $100 gift certificate from our company for your work for all you did and then I begin and then I would only have to pay for $4.95 to have her send that gift certificate to me oh my god...grrrr....scam magnet
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And not that this is a big thing but I put that in your poem because you were excited about it. And I wanted that poem to always be a keepsake for you to remind you and show you how loved you are. And now if you look at the poem it will give you bad memories.
Can I change the poem for you?
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It'll be fine. If you feel better you can change it. I do have a friend from one of the original groups before the scammers took over and she is taking care of publishing for free Tor which has like 10 of my friends in it so that'll be fun. It will be on Amazon soon.
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Let me take a look at it. I'm at the doc right now so I will be in touch when I get home
So glad something good is happening.
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Letting you know I will soon be posting the scam expose. Heading to the bank to get a new credit card. It's funny it feels so far away. It's about a half hour drive and when I worked, I drove it every day. I was talking to a friend who also worked everyday down there and she said she goes to Brrattleboro about once a month. A matter of perspective I guess.
Comment from karenina
Reverent, glory-filled verse for Easter!
Of course every day is the right day to show our faith, and your divine muse inspired your impeccable verse.
(Love this rendition of Hallelujah!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Reverent, glory-filled verse for Easter!
Of course every day is the right day to show our faith, and your divine muse inspired your impeccable verse.
(Love this rendition of Hallelujah!)
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Hi there my special and wonderful K, I thank you so very much for reviewing my Easter poem. Especially when there is no promotion. And yes, wasn't that whole video powerful??
You are so very kind and I appreciate you so very much my dear friend. Thanks from the bottom of my heart, my dear friend. Love, Debi
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Sorry for my tardiness. Crazy week!
I'd review you for two cents anyday!
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You are too sweet!!
Comment from Mia Twysted
A piece that speaks of the sacrifices that were made for us to be forgiving of sin. You must have faith in something greater than yourself. Always a pleasure to read your pieces.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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A piece that speaks of the sacrifices that were made for us to be forgiving of sin. You must have faith in something greater than yourself. Always a pleasure to read your pieces.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Hi Mia, thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for my Easter poem. It means the world to me.
Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, you've penned a timely poem with Easter upon us. Your verses follow the life of Christ and his love for us. Of note:
This man, a Jew, still does for you
(Let us not forget.)
Good rhyming couplets. Beautiful photo choice. Thank you for sharing the YouTube. Xo. M
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Hi Debi, you've penned a timely poem with Easter upon us. Your verses follow the life of Christ and his love for us. Of note:
This man, a Jew, still does for you
(Let us not forget.)
Good rhyming couplets. Beautiful photo choice. Thank you for sharing the YouTube. Xo. M
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Hey Sis, thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for my Easter poem. It means the world to me.
Thanks again, my dear SOTU. Lotsa Love, Debi
Comment from Janet Foor
Thank you for sharing this story of Jesus as we approach Easter. Excellent artwork to compliment your message. Perfect last couplet to conclude your lovely poem.
Blessings and Happy Easter.
Janet
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for sharing this story of Jesus as we approach Easter. Excellent artwork to compliment your message. Perfect last couplet to conclude your lovely poem.
Blessings and Happy Easter.
Janet
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Hi Janet, thank you from the bottom of my heart for the kind words for my Easter poem. It means the world to me.
Thanks again, my dear friend. Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-You wrote a very good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You also tell His story very well.
-I like how you start with His birth
and then show the many things he did
and how friends turned on Him, resulting
in his carrying his own cross, but "He would rise."
-A very good closing couplet.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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-Very nice artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-You wrote a very good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You also tell His story very well.
-I like how you start with His birth
and then show the many things he did
and how friends turned on Him, resulting
in his carrying his own cross, but "He would rise."
-A very good closing couplet.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
thanks so very much for the awesome comments for my Easter poem. I love to write my spiritual ones when I can. These are what's most important to me.
Thanks for reading this.. sorry, my. Keyboard is acting up all of. A sudden..whenever I type too fast it. Starts to put periods in. The middle of my sendtences.. so I. Hope. You don''t mind my crazy thank you.. LOL.
Thank you again, my dear friend. Debi
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You are very welcome, Debi. Right now I am using an old laptop so I know what you mean about these inconveniences!
Comment from Aussie
Amazing grace gave you the words. The video had tears running down my face. The beautiful voice singing Hallejula and the graphic black and white clip hit home. Thank you for writing for Easter. I wasn't impressed FS had no mention of an Easter poem/story. It isn't about chocolate. Thank you my friend in Christ. K xx
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Amazing grace gave you the words. The video had tears running down my face. The beautiful voice singing Hallejula and the graphic black and white clip hit home. Thank you for writing for Easter. I wasn't impressed FS had no mention of an Easter poem/story. It isn't about chocolate. Thank you my friend in Christ. K xx
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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Kace, my sister in Christ, you are a gem. Just as God intended you to be. Thank you for one of the nicest reviews ever. You confirmed that Easter should be kept sacred, yet I am in charge of the Easter egg hunt every year. My family knows what the day is truly about. We have some fun while we praise the Lord.
And yes, wasn't that video great? At first I was going to change it because it was so dark, but as I cried too all the way through it, I knew that indeed it was a dark time. And I love the song.
So thank you for the lovely words along with the six stars that I appreciate so very much, my sweet and wonderful friend.
God Bless you and Happy Easter! Lotsa Love and Hugs to you. Debi
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If I remember rightly, you had two versions of the song, the second wasn't about His sacrifice. Big hugs, Kace.
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I have posted a different version on another post. I think it may have been a Christmas one.
Comment from Sanku
This is a beautiful Easter poem. You have expressed your deep faith in Jesus by outlining his birth and purpose pof his life.. a life sacrificed to save humanity..
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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This is a beautiful Easter poem. You have expressed your deep faith in Jesus by outlining his birth and purpose pof his life.. a life sacrificed to save humanity..
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Santha, thanks for the incredible review for my Risen poem. I appreciate it so very much. Thanks also for your kind comments, my awesome friend.
And a blessed Easter to you~ Love, Debi
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a beautiful expression of faith and trust in Jesus. It is obvious that it comes from the heart. He gave so much to save us and really asks so little in return.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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This is a beautiful expression of faith and trust in Jesus. It is obvious that it comes from the heart. He gave so much to save us and really asks so little in return.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Debi, thanks for the incredible review for my Risen poem. I appreciate it so very much. Thanks also for your kind comments, my awesome friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
How beautiful, Debi, The poem and the presentation are wonderful and so well wrtten. I love that picture and blue colors. Good timing for Easter.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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How beautiful, Debi, The poem and the presentation are wonderful and so well wrtten. I love that picture and blue colors. Good timing for Easter.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 18-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Awe, thanks so much, Marival. I appreciate your very lovely review and words for my Jesus and Risen poem. With so many that seem to disagree on what is real or respectful, I felt the need to go with the old fashion belief that I know to be true. Thanks again, my very dear friend.
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I think everybody has their own spiritual path, it doesn't have to be one size for all.
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I think everybody has their own spiritual path, it doesn't have to be one size for all.
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You are so very right, Marival. You are so gracious, my (Inside and out) beautiful friend.
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Thank you :) you too
