Tears of the Phoenix
A twenty syllable poem.3 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
This is so beautiful, my friend :) And how did you download the moving artwork? Very eye-catching! And it goes perfectly with your poem, too.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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This is so beautiful, my friend :) And how did you download the moving artwork? Very eye-catching! And it goes perfectly with your poem, too.
Sincerely,
Shana :)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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The moving artwork was done by the same artist and I got it from fanart review. Thank you so much for the comments and rating.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem with good imagery words and colorful descriptions. It is thought provoking, and relatable too. Thanks for sharing it. Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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This is an excellent poem with good imagery words and colorful descriptions. It is thought provoking, and relatable too. Thanks for sharing it. Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you ever so much for the rating and encouraging words.
Comment from Heather Bagley
Even with so few words, this poem has very good imagery. It's very easy to envision what you describe. I especially love describing dew as turning into phoenix tears, when you think about the myth that Phoenix tears are all-healing, and dew is generally seen as representing healing/rebirth.
Good luck in your contest!
~Heather
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Even with so few words, this poem has very good imagery. It's very easy to envision what you describe. I especially love describing dew as turning into phoenix tears, when you think about the myth that Phoenix tears are all-healing, and dew is generally seen as representing healing/rebirth.
Good luck in your contest!
~Heather
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you ever so much for the rating, the comments and the best wishes.