Days Of Gold
contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Congratulation on your win.
The first line is my favourite and I like you made all three lines rhyme.
Those sunset hues in the pic are gorgeous to watch , I love autumn!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Ciao!
Congratulation on your win.
The first line is my favourite and I like you made all three lines rhyme.
Those sunset hues in the pic are gorgeous to watch , I love autumn!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thank you. I love to walk in the autumn woods.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a lovely, atmospheric post. Love the golden warmth of the visual reflected in your 5-7-5 verse, celebrating the mellow tones of Autumn. Great job and good luck! Not quite ready for Autumn yet though:) Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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What a lovely, atmospheric post. Love the golden warmth of the visual reflected in your 5-7-5 verse, celebrating the mellow tones of Autumn. Great job and good luck! Not quite ready for Autumn yet though:) Take care Debbie
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you
Comment from jessizero
I like that you rhymed every line, even though it isn't necessary. Your syllable count was right, also. I agree that autumn is a treat after summer, even though autumn barely happens where I live. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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I like that you rhymed every line, even though it isn't necessary. Your syllable count was right, also. I agree that autumn is a treat after summer, even though autumn barely happens where I live. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you