Park Dancers
An Autumn 5-7-52 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your words create a clear scene of nature. It is as if the trees are dancers forming a chorus line. Your words definitely create a feel for the season of Autumn. Excellent use of words.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Your words create a clear scene of nature. It is as if the trees are dancers forming a chorus line. Your words definitely create a feel for the season of Autumn. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, mermaids. I am delighted you like my choice of words.
Comment from jessizero
You got the syllable count right, and this poem was fun! I liked the mental image of trees being a chorus line. The picture you added helped with that, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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You got the syllable count right, and this poem was fun! I liked the mental image of trees being a chorus line. The picture you added helped with that, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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So pleased you like my poem/photo combo, jessizero.