Shade Fades
a 5-7-519 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Your syllable count is on the money and your presentation is lovely. I'm not looking forward to needing the shade for those hot, summer days; spring and fall are the seasons I like best!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Your syllable count is on the money and your presentation is lovely. I'm not looking forward to needing the shade for those hot, summer days; spring and fall are the seasons I like best!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Try to suffer through summer then. : )
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groan... (lol)
Comment from nancyjam
First of all, I love the image. It's perfect for your 5-7-5.
Your word choice is clever and the rhyming adds to the enjoyment of reading it. Autumn is my favorite season so this was a treat to read.
Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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First of all, I love the image. It's perfect for your 5-7-5.
Your word choice is clever and the rhyming adds to the enjoyment of reading it. Autumn is my favorite season so this was a treat to read.
Nancy
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Nancy, for giving this a look.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Very well done. No sixes left to give. Lovely picture.
How are Kathy and you doing? i hope things have settled down to a manageable routine. Enjoy your weekend. Karen
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Very well done. No sixes left to give. Lovely picture.
How are Kathy and you doing? i hope things have settled down to a manageable routine. Enjoy your weekend. Karen
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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We are moving forward. Thank you.
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:-)
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well it is way to early for any of this nonsensical end of summer talk. Waaaaaaaay!
Regardless, nice work for the contest. Good luck on your endeavor.
D
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Well it is way to early for any of this nonsensical end of summer talk. Waaaaaaaay!
Regardless, nice work for the contest. Good luck on your endeavor.
D
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Douglas
Comment from royowen
That's our season at the moment, Atumn, and the approaching chill of winter is first felt in the diminished heat of summer. This is a most perceptive view of seasonal change Bill, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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That's our season at the moment, Atumn, and the approaching chill of winter is first felt in the diminished heat of summer. This is a most perceptive view of seasonal change Bill, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Roy
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely "Ode to Autumn" poem - must be a contest made by one of our Aussie friends as we're into Spring. I loved the alliteration, and the assonance and internal rhyme in the second line!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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A lovely "Ode to Autumn" poem - must be a contest made by one of our Aussie friends as we're into Spring. I loved the alliteration, and the assonance and internal rhyme in the second line!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Helen, for the nice comments and promotion.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and good presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective seasonal and nature imagery.
-A very good opening line establishes the premise.
-Effective imagery and internal rhyme in line two
shows what the change is like.
-A very good concluding line.
-A good entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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-Very nice image and good presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective seasonal and nature imagery.
-A very good opening line establishes the premise.
-Effective imagery and internal rhyme in line two
shows what the change is like.
-A very good concluding line.
-A good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Pam
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You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading your autumn 5-7-5.
You paint a clear picture of the season without mentioning falling leaves or the colours orange and gold! The artwork does that for you.
Great choice of words - nice rhyme in shade fades and a lovely touch of alliteration in winter waits.
Good luck in the contest with this wonderful entry.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Hello :)
I really enjoyed reading your autumn 5-7-5.
You paint a clear picture of the season without mentioning falling leaves or the colours orange and gold! The artwork does that for you.
Great choice of words - nice rhyme in shade fades and a lovely touch of alliteration in winter waits.
Good luck in the contest with this wonderful entry.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Debra
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent ode to autumn in 5-7-5 format. I like your sound pairings in line 2, and also the alliteration n the third line. It is cleverly written and has a dtunning image. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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An excellent ode to autumn in 5-7-5 format. I like your sound pairings in line 2, and also the alliteration n the third line. It is cleverly written and has a dtunning image. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Wendy
Comment from zanya
Effective use of language here in this short format poem for the Ode to Autumn portraying some of the main features of the Autumn season 'shade fades' and 'cool rules the days;'
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Effective use of language here in this short format poem for the Ode to Autumn portraying some of the main features of the Autumn season 'shade fades' and 'cool rules the days;'
Comment Written 24-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Thank you, zanya