thoughts and feelings in poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "This Day"poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings
13 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Your words flow and rhyme flawlessly as does your message of faith and hope and the peace that comes when we walk in faith. This is indeed a happy poem.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
Your words flow and rhyme flawlessly as does your message of faith and hope and the peace that comes when we walk in faith. This is indeed a happy poem.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it. I can't picture my life without him.
Comment from royowen
I love the fact that you put your faith in God, through Christ, we know He loves us with and everlasting love that cannot die, and that He will be with us until the end, there is no death for those that await His coming, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
I love the fact that you put your faith in God, through Christ, we know He loves us with and everlasting love that cannot die, and that He will be with us until the end, there is no death for those that await His coming, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Roy for your review and kind words. I really do appreciate it. God Bless you.
Comment from Lisasview
Too bad there is no image with your poem... Would be nice... but I know it takes time to chose the perfect.
Using He at the beginning of the lines in a row stops the flow... Just my thoughts...
Lisa
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
Too bad there is no image with your poem... Would be nice... but I know it takes time to chose the perfect.
Using He at the beginning of the lines in a row stops the flow... Just my thoughts...
Lisa
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review I appreciate it. Hope you have a good day.
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I would read your work again... are you planning on making any corrections?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Walking with the knowledge of faith and hope here and I enjoyed your warm and faithful words for the contest. Such happiness within comes from our beliefs, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
Walking with the knowledge of faith and hope here and I enjoyed your warm and faithful words for the contest. Such happiness within comes from our beliefs, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 22-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words. I really do appreciate it. hope you have a great day.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a wonderful poem you wrote about Jesus. Yes, he is my friend, too and I'll love Him until the end. Faith is a wonderful thing we get from Him if we believe.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
What a wonderful poem you wrote about Jesus. Yes, he is my friend, too and I'll love Him until the end. Faith is a wonderful thing we get from Him if we believe.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your review, I truly appreciate it. Yes, faith is a wonderful thing.
Comment from teafor2
Unknown bard: A pious write without a doubt...This rhyming really speaks that out...Your title is simple, but carries clout...The whole poem makes soul want to shout:) Sorry, but your verbiage and rhymes caused my muse
to react. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
Unknown bard: A pious write without a doubt...This rhyming really speaks that out...Your title is simple, but carries clout...The whole poem makes soul want to shout:) Sorry, but your verbiage and rhymes caused my muse
to react. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Nice! thank you for your lovely review. I love your way with words. Have a good day.
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You are welcome. teafor2
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your welcome
Comment from QC Poet
Every day is a Blessing thank you for Sharing your happy poem posting with us and I wish you a happy Blessed Day as well as Good Luck with your Positive Thoughts posting
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
Every day is a Blessing thank you for Sharing your happy poem posting with us and I wish you a happy Blessed Day as well as Good Luck with your Positive Thoughts posting
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it. Have a good day.
Comment from Jeano
I've read them all and like yours the best. The inner peace and happiness you receive from your faith is recognized and admired. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
I've read them all and like yours the best. The inner peace and happiness you receive from your faith is recognized and admired. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and kind words, I really do appreciate it. God bless
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. The positive message about Jesus and how your faith makes you feel is a joy to read. The poem is well written and flows naturally. Great to read a poem with such a positive message.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
I thought this was well written. The positive message about Jesus and how your faith makes you feel is a joy to read. The poem is well written and flows naturally. Great to read a poem with such a positive message.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review and sweet words. I really do appreciate it. God bless
Comment from Julie Helms
Your poem expresses such true joy in the Lord!
A few typo fix suggestions:
What ever life holds (Whatever)
I find confort (Comfort)
For that promis,I love (Promise)
Best of luck with the contest!
Julie
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
Your poem expresses such true joy in the Lord!
A few typo fix suggestions:
What ever life holds (Whatever)
I find confort (Comfort)
For that promis,I love (Promise)
Best of luck with the contest!
Julie
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your review I do appreciate it. Thank you for the suggestions. I will go edit it now. God Bless you