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poems reflecting my thoughts and feelings

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Comment from Ginda Simpson
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Your words flow and rhyme flawlessly as does your message of faith and hope and the peace that comes when we walk in faith. This is indeed a happy poem.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it. I can't picture my life without him.
Comment from royowen
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I love the fact that you put your faith in God, through Christ, we know He loves us with and everlasting love that cannot die, and that He will be with us until the end, there is no death for those that await His coming, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
    Thank you, Roy for your review and kind words. I really do appreciate it. God Bless you.
Comment from Lisasview
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Too bad there is no image with your poem... Would be nice... but I know it takes time to chose the perfect.
Using He at the beginning of the lines in a row stops the flow... Just my thoughts...
Lisa

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your review I appreciate it. Hope you have a good day.
reply by Lisasview on 22-Feb-2024
    I would read your work again... are you planning on making any corrections?
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Walking with the knowledge of faith and hope here and I enjoyed your warm and faithful words for the contest. Such happiness within comes from our beliefs, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I really do appreciate it. hope you have a great day.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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What a wonderful poem you wrote about Jesus. Yes, he is my friend, too and I'll love Him until the end. Faith is a wonderful thing we get from Him if we believe.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much for your review, I truly appreciate it. Yes, faith is a wonderful thing.
Comment from teafor2
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Unknown bard: A pious write without a doubt...This rhyming really speaks that out...Your title is simple, but carries clout...The whole poem makes soul want to shout:) Sorry, but your verbiage and rhymes caused my muse
to react. Good luck in the contest. teafor2

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
    Nice! thank you for your lovely review. I love your way with words. Have a good day.
reply by teafor2 on 21-Feb-2024
    You are welcome. teafor2
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
    your welcome
Comment from QC Poet
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Every day is a Blessing thank you for Sharing your happy poem posting with us and I wish you a happy Blessed Day as well as Good Luck with your Positive Thoughts posting

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words. I do appreciate it. Have a good day.
Comment from Jeano
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I've read them all and like yours the best. The inner peace and happiness you receive from your faith is recognized and admired. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your review and kind words, I really do appreciate it. God bless
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought this was well written. The positive message about Jesus and how your faith makes you feel is a joy to read. The poem is well written and flows naturally. Great to read a poem with such a positive message.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your review and sweet words. I really do appreciate it. God bless
Comment from Julie Helms
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Your poem expresses such true joy in the Lord!

A few typo fix suggestions:

What ever life holds (Whatever)
I find confort (Comfort)
For that promis,I love (Promise)

Best of luck with the contest!
Julie

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your review I do appreciate it. Thank you for the suggestions. I will go edit it now. God Bless you