Bombs Away!
Every fall in my front yard it is bombs away.4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Gerard,
This haiku uses words well to give strong images of a driveway filled with
acorns freeing their seeds. I like the armor metaphor.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Hi Gerard,
This haiku uses words well to give strong images of a driveway filled with
acorns freeing their seeds. I like the armor metaphor.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Joan very much! I am enthused about the win since I was not quite sure if the metaphors i utilized would be understood. I am glad that you liked it. Regards from Gerard!
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My pleasure, Gerard.
Joan
P S I just published a book called The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry which is available on Amazon.com
Comment from nancyjam
Congrats on placing third in the contest with this very clever Haiku.
I enjoyed how you used the bombing, armament theme all the way through. Great imagery. Again, congratulations.
Nancy
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Congrats on placing third in the contest with this very clever Haiku.
I enjoyed how you used the bombing, armament theme all the way through. Great imagery. Again, congratulations.
Nancy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much Nancyjam! I was pleasantly surprised that this resonated as well as it did. it just goes to show me some of the best ones are often underrated. Thank you! Gerard!
Comment from Yusita
This is a neat write! The imagery and descriptions speak of a creative and imaginative mind. Bombadier acorns... armor plate driveway. Love it. Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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This is a neat write! The imagery and descriptions speak of a creative and imaginative mind. Bombadier acorns... armor plate driveway. Love it. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024
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Like the best things we all write the underlying factor is that it is true and happening in real time Thanks Yusita! regards GK
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like these squirrels don't like tidying up after themselves as they leave the debris for you to clear here, a fun post about the wildlife in your garden, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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It sounds like these squirrels don't like tidying up after themselves as they leave the debris for you to clear here, a fun post about the wildlife in your garden, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-May-2024
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Dolly, they perform such acrobatic feats that they would make the 3 Stooges jade green with envy. They are natural clowns when it comes to enjoying a meal. Thank you Regards GK
