Beyond The Treetops
A Magical Adventure27 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
A lovely story in a 100 word flash fiction.
Congratulations for All Time Best and for being recognized.
A positive fantasy, well, a positive anything, these days, is a welcomed thing. "Let your mind soar!." :)
Katharine
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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A lovely story in a 100 word flash fiction.
Congratulations for All Time Best and for being recognized.
A positive fantasy, well, a positive anything, these days, is a welcomed thing. "Let your mind soar!." :)
Katharine
Comment Written 20-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much for your review. It was one of those days when I needed to stop writing about drama and do something happy and magical. Thanks.....
Smiles, Carol
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well, it was that!
Comment from Navada
I like the imagination at play here and the way it touches upon children's interpretatins of the world around them. I also like the reveal at the end. Good luck for the contest! :)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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I like the imagination at play here and the way it touches upon children's interpretatins of the world around them. I also like the reveal at the end. Good luck for the contest! :)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Good day! Thank you for taking the time to read and more importantly, to enjoy my bit of fantasy. We all need to keep a tiny corner, even hidden deep inside, to enjoy being a child with all its wonder. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from XinaD
What a magical story!
A fantasy is just as real as the belief people have in it. You did a great job of capturing Lilly's wide-eyed wonderment and Trevor's cynicism. The bit at the end, with Pierre soaring by, was the cherry on top. Excellently done!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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What a magical story!
A fantasy is just as real as the belief people have in it. You did a great job of capturing Lilly's wide-eyed wonderment and Trevor's cynicism. The bit at the end, with Pierre soaring by, was the cherry on top. Excellently done!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Good day! Thank you for taking the time to read and more importantly, to enjoy my bit of fantasy. We all need to keep a tiny corner, even hidden deep inside, to enjoy being a child with all its wonder. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading this story. It had alot of jmagination in it for children. It was written well. I like the picture. Goes nicely with the story. Very good job
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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I enjoyed reading this story. It had alot of jmagination in it for children. It was written well. I like the picture. Goes nicely with the story. Very good job
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Thank you Brenda for your kind thoughts and review. I appreciate it very much. It was a brief moment to enjoy a better place.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Nicely done. You have excellently used the writing prompt. The artwork you chose is perfect, too. When you decided to start writing again, you made up for lost time. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Nicely done. You have excellently used the writing prompt. The artwork you chose is perfect, too. When you decided to start writing again, you made up for lost time. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I just needed a bit of lightness so I could continue with my other story. I am happy that you enjoyed this one.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a great 100-word fiction piece. He missed all the magic as he slept and woke defiant of what she saw and saw what he knew couldn't be reality.
This is whimsical and airy, B. Again! I loved it!
Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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This is a great 100-word fiction piece. He missed all the magic as he slept and woke defiant of what she saw and saw what he knew couldn't be reality.
This is whimsical and airy, B. Again! I loved it!
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, John. I needed something light and magical and somehow found it in those few words. Maybe the bird was really an angel sent to watch over the two. A nice warm thought.
Smiles and jugs, Carol
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning Begin Again, from Lisa in Spain...
Oh how I loved my very first read of yours early this morning...
I was swept away by the magical feeling I got reading it...
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest,
Lisa
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Good morning Begin Again, from Lisa in Spain...
Oh how I loved my very first read of yours early this morning...
I was swept away by the magical feeling I got reading it...
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest,
Lisa
Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Good morning, Lisa
I appreciate your comments and taking the time to read my magical thoughts... Could the bird have been an "angel?"
Have a great day! Carol
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Hi there,
A little sweet bird told me that I must have had my finger slip to a 4 Star when it of course deserved a 5 Star.
I wish I had known right away so I could have fixed the error immediately?
I am so sorry?.
Lisasview
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Hi there,
A little sweet bird told me that I must have had my finger slip to a 4 Star when it of course deserved a 5 Star.
I wish I had known right away so I could have fixed the error immediately?
I am so sorry?.
Lisasview
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No problems... A smile and best wishes to you!
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Glad you are not upset...
Lisa
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is quite a good 100-word story with a hint of magic. Or a wonderful dream that came to life. Seems like it should be a very good competitor in the contest. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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This is quite a good 100-word story with a hint of magic. Or a wonderful dream that came to life. Seems like it should be a very good competitor in the contest. Best of luck.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thanks, Carol.... I needed a brief reprise from the drama and it seemed like a magical place to settle. I wonder if the bird was actually an angel, watching over the children.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful story, a magical mix of fantasy and spiritual realities. Very nicely written - an excellent entry for the contest. Sending best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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A beautiful story, a magical mix of fantasy and spiritual realities. Very nicely written - an excellent entry for the contest. Sending best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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I'm glad you picked up on the spiritual part. In my mind, I thought the beautiful bird might have represented an "angel" watching over the two youngsters. Thanks so much, Wendy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice story. Error-free as near as I can tell.
They were exhausted enough to sleep at lunchtime?????? (smiley face here)
What is a divine (celestial) bird?
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Nice story. Error-free as near as I can tell.
They were exhausted enough to sleep at lunchtime?????? (smiley face here)
What is a divine (celestial) bird?
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Wayne.... The youngsters had climbed a very, very long way. Besides if they didn't nap, how could I finish my storyline? And the celestial bird.... possibly an "angel" watching over the two children.
Smiles, Carol
