The Light of Love
A 20 syllable poem for the contest.10 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a sweet poem. That is how I talk to God, too. This is excellent writing for the challenge! It has good descriptive words, imagery, and emotion. It is relatable, too. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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This is a sweet poem. That is how I talk to God, too. This is excellent writing for the challenge! It has good descriptive words, imagery, and emotion. It is relatable, too. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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With gratitude in my heart, I wish to thank you for a nice
Comment from Treischel
An outstanding sentiment displayed here in this twenty syllable poem that encompasses the light of grace and proclaims faith. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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An outstanding sentiment displayed here in this twenty syllable poem that encompasses the light of grace and proclaims faith. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for the support that you show in your reviews.
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful prayer, Patricia, written with clarity and heart-felt emotion. It is also beautifully presented. It expresses an important truth - it's only as we live and walk in His light that we can share it with others. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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A beautiful prayer, Patricia, written with clarity and heart-felt emotion. It is also beautifully presented. It expresses an important truth - it's only as we live and walk in His light that we can share it with others. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work and comments
Comment from Carol Clark2
What a lovely prayer poem, Pat. The picture is nice, and it fits your words quite well. I also like the presentation you used. We cannot reflect the light unless we stay near to it. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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What a lovely prayer poem, Pat. The picture is nice, and it fits your words quite well. I also like the presentation you used. We cannot reflect the light unless we stay near to it. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from Begin Again
After several traumatic losses in my life, I thought I'd never be graced with standing in the light again. But time passes and suddenly, God is standing there, waiting to take our hand and lead us back to the light. The picture was perfect and the words touched me. Thank yu for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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After several traumatic losses in my life, I thought I'd never be graced with standing in the light again. But time passes and suddenly, God is standing there, waiting to take our hand and lead us back to the light. The picture was perfect and the words touched me. Thank yu for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you for your nice review. I am glad that you were able to overcome the traumas in your life and you feel like that you are standing in the light of God?s love now. Patricia.
Comment from royowen
What a lovely post, it's the perfect wish of the scripture, I'm even more convinced than ever that if our request is honest then the request will be answered, so be expectant Pat, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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What a lovely post, it's the perfect wish of the scripture, I'm even more convinced than ever that if our request is honest then the request will be answered, so be expectant Pat, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your lovely review is always appreciated.
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Well done
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a beautiful poem. Your poem reads and flows well. I like the message in this poem. Your 20-syllable count is on point for this contest. Your picture compliments the poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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This is a beautiful poem. Your poem reads and flows well. I like the message in this poem. Your 20-syllable count is on point for this contest. Your picture compliments the poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work. It is appreciated always
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You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
This was a great message in just twenty syllables (yes, I counted). We should all feel this way. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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This was a great message in just twenty syllables (yes, I counted). We should all feel this way. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I am so thankful that I have people like you review my work. Thank you.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I liked this poem. The picture is so bright and cheery. It goes well withe words. I like the words you used to describe God's light. He is the light of the world. Great job
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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I liked this poem. The picture is so bright and cheery. It goes well withe words. I like the words you used to describe God's light. He is the light of the world. Great job
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work. It is always appreciated.
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, the Lord is our Light and our Salvation. We need to be in His Light because in His light we see light and others can see His light, too. Thanks for your lovely verse the Light of the World.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Yes, the Lord is our Light and our Salvation. We need to be in His Light because in His light we see light and others can see His light, too. Thanks for your lovely verse the Light of the World.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it very much.