Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Patch and Ruby ~Hawaii or Bust~"Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
36 total reviews
Comment from Annmuma
I thought I had one more six, but I don't ....AND this is a ten star for creativity and fun read. Your talent in poetry continues to surprise me as most of your poems are always better than the last one! How can that be? Good job ann
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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I thought I had one more six, but I don't ....AND this is a ten star for creativity and fun read. Your talent in poetry continues to surprise me as most of your poems are always better than the last one! How can that be? Good job ann
Comment Written 23-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2023
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Ann, you are always such an awesome reviewer and friend. Thank you for your kind words and for having some fun with me with these naughty girls. Love, Debi
Comment from Wy Jung
This cracked me up, and because I'm sitting here on the Big Island at the end of my 4 month stay, it made me laugh even more. I like you used kitty language throughout. It was truly delightful. The font is a tiny bit hard to read but I like the way it looks for the story/poem, so I'm sure it's fine.
Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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This cracked me up, and because I'm sitting here on the Big Island at the end of my 4 month stay, it made me laugh even more. I like you used kitty language throughout. It was truly delightful. The font is a tiny bit hard to read but I like the way it looks for the story/poem, so I'm sure it's fine.
Well done.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2023
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Thank you so very much for this very kind review and comments.
I sure do appreciate it. Merry Christmas to your and yours!
Love, Debi
Comment from BethShelby
This was a really cute poem about the cats wanting to take a trip togerther. You've written the story into a cleverly rhyming poem that was really fun to read.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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This was a really cute poem about the cats wanting to take a trip togerther. You've written the story into a cleverly rhyming poem that was really fun to read.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Beth, you are always such an awesome reviewer and friend. Thank you for your kind words and for having some fun with me with these naughty girls. Love, Debi
Comment from patcelaw
This is a delightful form, and it was a fun one to listen to as I do not read very well anymore because of my vision. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. And you have a wonderful, happy and beautiful Christmas. May you also have a prosperous and healthy new year. Patricia.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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This is a delightful form, and it was a fun one to listen to as I do not read very well anymore because of my vision. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. And you have a wonderful, happy and beautiful Christmas. May you also have a prosperous and healthy new year. Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Patricia, Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem?
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Debi,
This is a cute poem about cats acting like humans. They had grand plans to go far away but couldn't get a few steps past the front yard. They are too smart for themselves. At least they prefer warm beds instead of cold walks.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas.
Joan
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Hi Debi,
This is a cute poem about cats acting like humans. They had grand plans to go far away but couldn't get a few steps past the front yard. They are too smart for themselves. At least they prefer warm beds instead of cold walks.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas.
Joan
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem?
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend
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You're most welcome, Debi.
Joan
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
What a fun poem about Patch and Ruby. I'm familiar with Patch, Helen's cat because she writes about him quite a bit. Animals are funny. I have a girl cat, ellie, she is very sweet and smart. I give her treats after dinner and if I'm late she will sit in front of me staring until I give her treats. LoL
You captured Patch and Ruby personality well. Good job.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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What a fun poem about Patch and Ruby. I'm familiar with Patch, Helen's cat because she writes about him quite a bit. Animals are funny. I have a girl cat, ellie, she is very sweet and smart. I give her treats after dinner and if I'm late she will sit in front of me staring until I give her treats. LoL
You captured Patch and Ruby personality well. Good job.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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MariVal Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem _
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend
Love, Debi
Comment from karenina
Wow. I'm pretty sure you managed to weave in every "cat-pun" word in my dictionary and in such a fun way! I loved my cats, but we're not allowed to have any pets where I live.
Oh, MEOW, I guess I'll have to live vicariously through these hilarious adventures!
Great imagination and humor. SOMEHOW, you've managed to fit all of this in meter and rhyme (no easy feat with such a comprehensive adventure!)
Very cute...and, um... is this YOU cutting back on posting? Ahem. Not sure I've noticed THAT!
(smile)
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Wow. I'm pretty sure you managed to weave in every "cat-pun" word in my dictionary and in such a fun way! I loved my cats, but we're not allowed to have any pets where I live.
Oh, MEOW, I guess I'll have to live vicariously through these hilarious adventures!
Great imagination and humor. SOMEHOW, you've managed to fit all of this in meter and rhyme (no easy feat with such a comprehensive adventure!)
Very cute...and, um... is this YOU cutting back on posting? Ahem. Not sure I've noticed THAT!
(smile)
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2023
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Hello my sweet friend. I have been missing you something fierce. No, now that I am in remission I am good to go. Still limit screen time they say but for at least the rest of this month I would like to stay where I am in rankings, but then came my mom?s birthday and had to do that and yeah, still had time to miss you tho. I haven?t checked to see if you got my email this morning so I will reserve the rest of my conversation to there. Thanks for the sweet review and comments, dear K.
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Hmmm. I knew of your good news and was sure you were running on extra octane good news to finish out the year!
(As you should!)
How awesome are good medical reports, huh?
Comment from June Sargent
Enough catitude here to last 9 lifetimes! I'm a crazy cat lady for sure and have followed Helen's adventures with Patch. I know how they think and how they plot. I'm glad their plans were foiled. But I'd still keep an eye on these two in cahoot!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Enough catitude here to last 9 lifetimes! I'm a crazy cat lady for sure and have followed Helen's adventures with Patch. I know how they think and how they plot. I'm glad their plans were foiled. But I'd still keep an eye on these two in cahoot!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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June, Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi
Comment from Sanku
I am a diehard cat lover,Debbie.I used to have up to four cats in my house .but in this apt complex pets are not allowed so i miss not having a cat..
very cute poem.I loved how they planned their their trip but am so sorry it didnt materialise!..
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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I am a diehard cat lover,Debbie.I used to have up to four cats in my house .but in this apt complex pets are not allowed so i miss not having a cat..
very cute poem.I loved how they planned their their trip but am so sorry it didnt materialise!..
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi
Comment from jim vecchio
Thoroughly enjoyable, both the poem and the video. But what else can I expect from you? It's amazing the way these cats display such diverse personalities and behaviors! Wonder if they think the same of us! Hope there will be more Patch and Ruby stories!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Thoroughly enjoyable, both the poem and the video. But what else can I expect from you? It's amazing the way these cats display such diverse personalities and behaviors! Wonder if they think the same of us! Hope there will be more Patch and Ruby stories!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2023
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Jim, Thank you for having a little fun with me with this post. I appreciate your kind words for my silly cat poem.
Pease take care of yourself and have a Merry Christmas, my dear friend love, Debi
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Wishing you and your loved ones the very best!