From Teenager to Seenager!
(You're never too old to be young)15 total reviews
Comment from Scott Dylan Thomas
What a wonderful poem, Mimi! I enjoyed the humor throughout and could not agree more, naps are where it's at. The poem speaks to a sense of adventure and wisdom whichi is so important to experience and share.
-Scott
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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What a wonderful poem, Mimi! I enjoyed the humor throughout and could not agree more, naps are where it's at. The poem speaks to a sense of adventure and wisdom whichi is so important to experience and share.
-Scott
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Hi, Scott! Thank you so very much for the lovely review. It was fun to write because there was so much that one can relate to after a "certain" age! LOL! I'm so happy you enjoyed... Thanks again and have a wonderful evening!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hahaha.... what an awesome and humorous poem, I love it. I'm 64 so 70 is not far and I like your outlook on life (though this may be fiction). With all the "must do" things to feel bad about, you give good advice.
Good luck in the Uplifting Poetry! writing prompt contest.
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Hahaha.... what an awesome and humorous poem, I love it. I'm 64 so 70 is not far and I like your outlook on life (though this may be fiction). With all the "must do" things to feel bad about, you give good advice.
Good luck in the Uplifting Poetry! writing prompt contest.
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thanks, Gypsy, for the fun review! I'm so happy you enjoyed... I was actually inspired by a set of mini-thoughts that someone had seen on Facebook (author unknown)... I just tried to put some of them into a poetry format. Thanks again, you youngster! Have a wonderful evening!
Comment from Sally Law
First, welcome to FanStory, Mimi! I'm laughing so hard I hardly tyoe this. Every stanza is a rhyming riot!
Yes, I find within myself a young seenager too.
This has uplifted anyone with a pulse! I dearly hope you win the contest.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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First, welcome to FanStory, Mimi! I'm laughing so hard I hardly tyoe this. Every stanza is a rhyming riot!
Yes, I find within myself a young seenager too.
This has uplifted anyone with a pulse! I dearly hope you win the contest.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Hi, Sally! Thank you so much for your wonderful review... I had so much fun putting these snippets of stories into poetry form (and was hoping my new name for seniors would be a rhyming win)! I'm so happy this one gave you chuckles and laughs! Thank you again and have a fantastic evening!
Comment from Minela Ibisevic
I think your poem is excellent! I haven't chuckled reading one in a while but your poem defineltley brought smiles. I'm not a 'seenager' just yet but don't think I'll mind it when I am. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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I think your poem is excellent! I haven't chuckled reading one in a while but your poem defineltley brought smiles. I'm not a 'seenager' just yet but don't think I'll mind it when I am. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I'm so happy you got a good chuckle out of it! This actually was inspired by a short entry (do not know author) someone put on Facebook, and I just couldn't resist putting it into poetry format. Thank you again and have a beautiful day!
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It turned out brilliantly! It was my pleasure. Thank you :)
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Mimi How well you sum us up I love the term seenager been there done that lol
Yes ai keep telling myself nothing has changed except for the daily dosset box, sudoko for the brain and Nana Nap or SCAN. Senior Citizen
Afternoon Nap ) lol
Your poem was well written and fun to read
Good luck in the contest
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Hi Mimi How well you sum us up I love the term seenager been there done that lol
Yes ai keep telling myself nothing has changed except for the daily dosset box, sudoko for the brain and Nana Nap or SCAN. Senior Citizen
Afternoon Nap ) lol
Your poem was well written and fun to read
Good luck in the contest
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Hi, Chris! Thank you so very much for the wonderful review! It was inspired by a short story I had read on Facebook (author unknown), but felt I just had to put it into rhyme! I'm so glad you enjoyed... Thank you again and have a beautiful day!
Comment from patricia dillon
Having recently turned seventy myself, I could identify with much of what you wrote in this poem. I appreciate all your tips, especially going to the "Jim!"
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Having recently turned seventy myself, I could identify with much of what you wrote in this poem. I appreciate all your tips, especially going to the "Jim!"
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 15-May-2023
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Thank you so very much for the great review and am so happy that you enjoyed! It was fun to write and came forth "quite honestly!" LOL! Thanks again and have a wonderful day!
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You're welcome
Comment from jessizero
I'm not quite a "seenager" yet, but I am getting there! I was very amused by your poem. It sounds like growing old is a great adventure. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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I'm not quite a "seenager" yet, but I am getting there! I was very amused by your poem. It sounds like growing old is a great adventure. LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-May-2023
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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Thank you so very much for the great review! I'm so happy you enjoyed and were amused by the antics of the "seenager!" It was fun to try and put this story into poetry form! Thank you again and have a wonderful day!
Comment from Julie Lau
Well done! I got a lot of laughs out of this, being a member of the 'seenage' club myself... and I never get tired of it! Isn't it just great?However I'd like just a tad more of the energy I used to have...
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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Well done! I got a lot of laughs out of this, being a member of the 'seenage' club myself... and I never get tired of it! Isn't it just great?However I'd like just a tad more of the energy I used to have...
Comment Written 14-May-2023
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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Thank you so much for this fun review! Yes... if we could ONLY harvest some more energy! LOL! Thank you again - I'm so happy it brought some chuckles!
Comment from Wendy G
Very clever poem, celebrating achievements in life, and facing the future with humour and realism, all positively expressed. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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Very clever poem, celebrating achievements in life, and facing the future with humour and realism, all positively expressed. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 14-May-2023
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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Thank you, Wendy, for a wonderful review! I'm so happy that you enjoyed! Have a beautiful day!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
this poem emphasizes that we should think young
that we are only as old as we feel
we are too old to go to school, and probably retired.
enjoyed reading your poem
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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this poem emphasizes that we should think young
that we are only as old as we feel
we are too old to go to school, and probably retired.
enjoyed reading your poem
Comment Written 13-May-2023
reply by the author on 14-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Rosemary, for the lovely review! Have a beautiful day!