My Poem
a poem8 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A beautiful poem and words that capture your childhood home. I think that this can stir memories of childhood homes regardless of the location or type, and you did this in a one-line poem.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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A beautiful poem and words that capture your childhood home. I think that this can stir memories of childhood homes regardless of the location or type, and you did this in a one-line poem.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Mary
Comment from ESOSTINE
What an amazing photo that captures the whole of your childhood home. How challenging to say more in just a line poem. Well done, dear Bill. Thanks for sharing the world around you, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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What an amazing photo that captures the whole of your childhood home. How challenging to say more in just a line poem. Well done, dear Bill. Thanks for sharing the world around you, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you, ESOSTINE
Comment from Ric Myworld
Your poem and picture combination give us a glimpse to one of those wonderful places that we'd all have liked to have grown up on. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Your poem and picture combination give us a glimpse to one of those wonderful places that we'd all have liked to have grown up on. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Ric
Comment from lyenochka
And with the title, your one line poem even rhymes. Nice way to conjure up the childhood memories and the home of one's childhood never leaves our minds. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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And with the title, your one line poem even rhymes. Nice way to conjure up the childhood memories and the home of one's childhood never leaves our minds. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thanks, Helen
Comment from kahpot
Yep, you have summed it up here in so few words, these types of memories never seem to fade, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Yep, you have summed it up here in so few words, these types of memories never seem to fade, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from nomi338
Wow Bill. How old are you, that thing looks Jurassic. Are you by any chance one of the cave men from that period? I always felt that you were kind of timeless, but never suspected that you were among the first men on Earth.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Wow Bill. How old are you, that thing looks Jurassic. Are you by any chance one of the cave men from that period? I always felt that you were kind of timeless, but never suspected that you were among the first men on Earth.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Yes, and that is Dino the dinosaur drinking from the pond.
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Yikes!
Comment from rjuselius
Indeed, children have the most fun with little demands. A child at heart can enjoy also such things.
Nicely written and beautifully done.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Indeed, children have the most fun with little demands. A child at heart can enjoy also such things.
Nicely written and beautifully done.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Rebekka, for the stunning review. Bill
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are reminiscing here Bill and it sounds like you liked in the country and enjoyed some fresh air, I wish you luck with the one line contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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You are reminiscing here Bill and it sounds like you liked in the country and enjoyed some fresh air, I wish you luck with the one line contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Dolly
