Have You?
Enjoy the beauty around us.51 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your poem is well crafted, creative, and descriptive. It shows an appreciation for nature and the beauty God has placed around us. You picture pairs perfectly and helps deliver your message that all we have to do is look around. Well done.
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Your poem is well crafted, creative, and descriptive. It shows an appreciation for nature and the beauty God has placed around us. You picture pairs perfectly and helps deliver your message that all we have to do is look around. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
Comment from mermaids
Your words show how important nature is and how wonderful nature makes us feel. I like how your second lines ask a question which makes the reader think. Excellent poem that takes the reader out into nature, a great place.
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Your words show how important nature is and how wonderful nature makes us feel. I like how your second lines ask a question which makes the reader think. Excellent poem that takes the reader out into nature, a great place.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Your experience in nature sounds amazing.
Excellent poem about nature's beauty.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Your experience in nature sounds amazing.
Excellent poem about nature's beauty.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
Comment from June Sargent
What an idyllic place that must have been! It's a shame these days when young ones growing up in a city miss out on such natural beauty and tranquility. Thank you for sharing a bit of your childhood. I enjoyed the visit.
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What an idyllic place that must have been! It's a shame these days when young ones growing up in a city miss out on such natural beauty and tranquility. Thank you for sharing a bit of your childhood. I enjoyed the visit.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Nice job! Interesting!
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Nice job! Interesting!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
Comment from Spitfire
Your use of parallel structure works well here. The speaker wants others to enjoy nature as much as he/she does. Well-constructed couplets. Even better would be to name a specific bird or flower.
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Your use of parallel structure works well here. The speaker wants others to enjoy nature as much as he/she does. Well-constructed couplets. Even better would be to name a specific bird or flower.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully written piece of poetry dear Willie! The imagery is exquisite and the presentation is exceptional!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
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This is a beautifully written piece of poetry dear Willie! The imagery is exquisite and the presentation is exceptional!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
Comment from pome lover
what a beautiful, restful place. It's great that you appreciate those things - bird song, flowers. You are probably a very sensitive person. For sure, you love the beauty of nature, and take the time to write about it.
Very nice.
Congratulations on All Time Best.
Katharine
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what a beautiful, restful place. It's great that you appreciate those things - bird song, flowers. You are probably a very sensitive person. For sure, you love the beauty of nature, and take the time to write about it.
Very nice.
Congratulations on All Time Best.
Katharine
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
Comment from evilynne
A lovely poem, well written. We all need to open our eyes to see such wonders. It is great that you had such a place to enjoy nature. Evi
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A lovely poem, well written. We all need to open our eyes to see such wonders. It is great that you had such a place to enjoy nature. Evi
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
Comment from papa55mike
We're looking for spring also, and hummingbird season will be close behind. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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We're looking for spring also, and hummingbird season will be close behind. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023