Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Tense and tight. A great combination for your chapter, Gretchen. Finally, Missy makes her move. This was the chapter I didn't see, so I had to read it out of sequence.

"I can't walk," he moans [Needs a period]

Now, on with the next.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023

Thanks, Jay, for catching the spag. I appreciate the nice review and comments. Gretchen

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

They're not going anywhere with crazy Missy, are they? Where's Mitch? I hope he surprises them all and shows up. It's odd that Tyler would start asking questions so late in the game. Hope Miranda figures out something fast!

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023

He didn't really have any reason to ask questions until Miranda made the comment about Missys missing husband. Then it was too late. Thank you for this great review. Gretchen

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Where is Mitch? If he is so worried about her where is he now when she needs him? I will be happy to know why she has it in for Miranda. Maybe Mitch will show up to save her before it goes much further. I hope you are going to post the next chapter tomorrow. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023

Mitch is nursing his wounded ego. But has his trusted crew watching over her. Don't give up on him yet. Gretchen

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

Wow! She is quite in the open with all her shenanigans, and she doesn't seem to care to no surprise. Did she somehow get in Tyler's good graces to get to Miranda, or did it just so happen Tyler was there when she resurfaced? Either way, it was an exciting chapter, Gretchen. Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023

I'm guessing Missy can find the weaknesses of almost any man. She's like an animal who hunts. Thank you for the questions. Like how you think. Gretchen

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

Yikes! She's got both Miranda and the deputy. I can't imagine how they're going to get out of this mess. Hopefully, Mitch comes around in time, or Deputy Personality hasn't left.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023

Don't count Miranda out. She is about to go into babysitter mode. Lol. Thank you for this awesome review. Gretchen

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Oh no! I wonder what Missy blackmailed Tyler with to
make him act as he did, Gretchen? Surely, she must've.
You did a great job. The action and dialogue were great.
I believe Missy gave him the earring, he didn't find it in
Missy's yard. He would've showed her before that night.
Missy just stood there gloating as she watched Miranda
help Tyler. Missy for sure is a psycho. You added much
intrigue for future chapters. What a cliff hanger.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023

Thank you. So pleased you like it. Sometimes the "victim" gets more than the blackmailed. And Missy sees herself as the victim. Gretchen

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Wow you've really wound this up to fever pitch, Missy really is as mad as a cut snake, she'll stop at nothing to get her way, there is no one on God's green earth as nutty as her. I think you've explained how the really evil people think, well done, Gretchen, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023

Thanks, Roy. I'm glad you liked this. Greychen

reply by royowen on 12-Feb-2023

I do indeed

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

Well, you certainly got a good start on something...I am not sure where it is going. Every time I had an opinion, it was wrong. At first I thought Miranda was the Sherrif daughter, and then I thought Tyler might be interested in her. I think I am 0 for 2. Good job. Terry.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023

Thanks, Terry. I appreciate your interest. Gretchen

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Pretty, rich, women can make silly old boys do just about anything. Well, at least for a while. Then, if they only shoot you in your leg, you're lucky. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023

Where else would they shoot you? Lol. Thank you for your fun review. Gretchen

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this post with us. I sure hope Mitch isn't far away. Missy is an evil person. Tyler fell for her act. I can't wait to read more. You are doing a great job writing this.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2023

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2023

Thank you so much. I'm happy you've stayed for the whole ride. Gretchen