The Miranda Chronicles
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Bet Waylon was all excited about the three bodies extracted from the lake.
With the folded flyer in her pocket Maranda might be hoping to collect the bounty if one of the three turns out to be the missing teen.
"waters edge" should be water's edge.
Sounds like Maranda might be falling for Mitch.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Bet Waylon was all excited about the three bodies extracted from the lake.
With the folded flyer in her pocket Maranda might be hoping to collect the bounty if one of the three turns out to be the missing teen.
"waters edge" should be water's edge.
Sounds like Maranda might be falling for Mitch.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you for catching the spag. I appreciate this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Gretchen, with this chapter. I enjoyed
reading it. There was great action and discovery of many
things. Miranda showed a little more of what she's made
of with her thoughts and actions. Behind her tough exterior
is a woman who cares about others and hasn't given or shown
much of her true self until now. Mitch even showed a little more
of his true intentions. I believed he meant well towards Miranda.
I'm glad Aaron and Waylon were able to participate in the raising
of the cars. What a shock it would've been to see the victims.
But, boys will be boys--they will rehash that event forever. I liked
the inclusion of the flyers naked to the post. As for who the victims
are, that will make for a great chapter. Hmm, wonder where Missy's
husband fits in.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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You did a great job, Gretchen, with this chapter. I enjoyed
reading it. There was great action and discovery of many
things. Miranda showed a little more of what she's made
of with her thoughts and actions. Behind her tough exterior
is a woman who cares about others and hasn't given or shown
much of her true self until now. Mitch even showed a little more
of his true intentions. I believed he meant well towards Miranda.
I'm glad Aaron and Waylon were able to participate in the raising
of the cars. What a shock it would've been to see the victims.
But, boys will be boys--they will rehash that event forever. I liked
the inclusion of the flyers naked to the post. As for who the victims
are, that will make for a great chapter. Hmm, wonder where Missy's
husband fits in.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you are continuing to enjoy this. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
I love you no nonsense style, I suspect Miranda is your alter ego, Elaine, my wife is like that, seemingly complex, but a simple philosophy in life, a good friend, no crap, she's a great mum, grandmother and loyal friend, the perfect woman for me, I could have never married someone like my mum, and Mitch is probably like me, beautiful written.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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I love you no nonsense style, I suspect Miranda is your alter ego, Elaine, my wife is like that, seemingly complex, but a simple philosophy in life, a good friend, no crap, she's a great mum, grandmother and loyal friend, the perfect woman for me, I could have never married someone like my mum, and Mitch is probably like me, beautiful written.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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If you're like Mitch, you're a good man. And your wife must be a hoot. Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it. Gretchen
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Miranda deserves a break
Comment from Sankey
Another excellent oncoming romance. All very interesting. You tell a great story. I do look forward to whatever is gonna happen with Miranda and Mitch. It looks like Waylon's father is not really interested in supporting him. No spags.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Another excellent oncoming romance. All very interesting. You tell a great story. I do look forward to whatever is gonna happen with Miranda and Mitch. It looks like Waylon's father is not really interested in supporting him. No spags.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Not sure when Dougie will pop up again. I appreciate your input and comments. Gretchen
Comment from damommy
Yayyyy! I'm glad they were both honest about their feelings. I enjoyed the description of the place they once enjoyed with their families. Sadly, that happens a lot to places we remember from years ago.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Yayyyy! I'm glad they were both honest about their feelings. I enjoyed the description of the place they once enjoyed with their families. Sadly, that happens a lot to places we remember from years ago.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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It does happen more often than not. Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad Mitch and Miranda had this discussion. It suits them. Not overly romantic, yet honest and to the point. It was perfect. I can't wait to see who those bodies belong to. I'm wondering if one of them isn't Jason. I think one is.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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I'm glad Mitch and Miranda had this discussion. It suits them. Not overly romantic, yet honest and to the point. It was perfect. I can't wait to see who those bodies belong to. I'm wondering if one of them isn't Jason. I think one is.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much for this awesome review. Who knows who those bodies are? I appreciate the review. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Damn it, where are those sixes when I need one most. LOL. An old boy who steps up and takes advantage of the situation like he should if he really likes someone. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Damn it, where are those sixes when I need one most. LOL. An old boy who steps up and takes advantage of the situation like he should if he really likes someone. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you. I'll take an honest review over a six anyday. But I won't turn a six star down. Lol. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I like Miranda. She points out the elephant in the room. She is straightforward and honest and wants everyone else to be too. What's not to like. Mitch sees her as a puzzle and he likes puzzles. LOL She tells us why she is attracted to Mitch as well. Looks like things are heating up for the two of them. Well done, Gretchen. Nancy:) xxx
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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I like Miranda. She points out the elephant in the room. She is straightforward and honest and wants everyone else to be too. What's not to like. Mitch sees her as a puzzle and he likes puzzles. LOL She tells us why she is attracted to Mitch as well. Looks like things are heating up for the two of them. Well done, Gretchen. Nancy:) xxx
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Nancy both for the comments and the six star rating. Much appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from John Ciarmello
I'm positive now that we have some cosmic muse connection, lol. It seems our characters are falling in love at the same time. I said to myself omg, Gretchen is going to think I'm using her idea, but it's how it worked out as I wrote their little ditty yesterday. :). I'm more excited about mitch and Miranda's love affair and the fact that he finally gave her a proper peck! This was a great chapter, as usual. Best JohnC
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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I'm positive now that we have some cosmic muse connection, lol. It seems our characters are falling in love at the same time. I said to myself omg, Gretchen is going to think I'm using her idea, but it's how it worked out as I wrote their little ditty yesterday. :). I'm more excited about mitch and Miranda's love affair and the fact that he finally gave her a proper peck! This was a great chapter, as usual. Best JohnC
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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I just read your post. Excellent. And no, I don't think you were copying me
Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Good. I like their honesty towards each other. I wonder if there could be a body inside the washing machine, but I doubt it would be big enough. Good writing, always enough to maintain the interest, provoke thought about what's happening, and develop the characters.
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Good. I like their honesty towards each other. I wonder if there could be a body inside the washing machine, but I doubt it would be big enough. Good writing, always enough to maintain the interest, provoke thought about what's happening, and develop the characters.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2023
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Thank you so much. I appreciate the nice comments. Gretchen
