The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Not So Happy (Miranda)"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am glad Miranda made a good choice dealing with Dougie. I doubt the dead flowers came from him, probably Missy, but Miranda should've called the sheriff. LOL I really like this story.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I am glad Miranda made a good choice dealing with Dougie. I doubt the dead flowers came from him, probably Missy, but Miranda should've called the sheriff. LOL I really like this story.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate your kind words. Glad you are enjoying this. Gretchen
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Sure Miranda was "shocked" to see Dougie standing in her office door.
Dougie still does not want his son, this new construction gig is much more important to him than Waylon.
Dougie hits Miranda up for a money investment in his new "get rich quick" scheme.
"flowers arrangements" should be flower arrangements.
Uh-oh! Miranda better watch out or she will become Waylon's new momma.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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Sure Miranda was "shocked" to see Dougie standing in her office door.
Dougie still does not want his son, this new construction gig is much more important to him than Waylon.
Dougie hits Miranda up for a money investment in his new "get rich quick" scheme.
"flowers arrangements" should be flower arrangements.
Uh-oh! Miranda better watch out or she will become Waylon's new momma.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2022
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I don't think she'd mind being a more permanent fixture in Waylon's life. Thanks so much for this awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes it takes us a while, but given enough time, a good portion of us get smart and learn to avoid the things that never turn out like we'd like to expect. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Sometimes it takes us a while, but given enough time, a good portion of us get smart and learn to avoid the things that never turn out like we'd like to expect. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Yep. She's done with his shenanigans. Lol. But he's not done yet. Thanks so much for this awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very nice, error-free writing. Good progress.
Dougie asking for $10,000 is a bit incredible, unbelievable for this story. He might need that much for a 'start-up' deal, but he would know without a doubt that Miranda would not possibly have that much.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Very nice, error-free writing. Good progress.
Dougie asking for $10,000 is a bit incredible, unbelievable for this story. He might need that much for a 'start-up' deal, but he would know without a doubt that Miranda would not possibly have that much.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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I think he believes she might ask her parents for cash. And he does believe his charm would make magic happen. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Of course, Dougie wants major money for his investment--
which may not even be real. You did a great job, Gretchen,
with this chapter. I liked how you showed Dougie hadn't
changed but Miranda had. Hopefully, she's wised up to
his methods and won't let him push her around anymore.
Yes, Waylon, has and will continue to grow on Miranda.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Of course, Dougie wants major money for his investment--
which may not even be real. You did a great job, Gretchen,
with this chapter. I liked how you showed Dougie hadn't
changed but Miranda had. Hopefully, she's wised up to
his methods and won't let him push her around anymore.
Yes, Waylon, has and will continue to grow on Miranda.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Thanks, Jan, for this awesome review. I appreciate it. Gretchen
Comment from John Ciarmello
Oh, boy! This plot is riddled with curious turns! The dead flowers? Yikes! Dougie, implying a romp and asking for money? I almost thought she was going to head to the hotel. I'm glad she didn't! Great stuff, Gretchen. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Oh, boy! This plot is riddled with curious turns! The dead flowers? Yikes! Dougie, implying a romp and asking for money? I almost thought she was going to head to the hotel. I'm glad she didn't! Great stuff, Gretchen. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Shes finally starting to realize her own worth. Thanks to Aaron and Waylon. She's moved past Dougie. Lol. Thank you so much for this awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Of course my mind drifts to Ms. Toblerone, the only way a nutcase like her would give up, would be permanent jail, or death, it seems to me. And now Dougie iscthere to middy the waters, excellent episode, she sounds like she might enjoy adoptive parenting, well done Gretchen, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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Of course my mind drifts to Ms. Toblerone, the only way a nutcase like her would give up, would be permanent jail, or death, it seems to me. And now Dougie iscthere to middy the waters, excellent episode, she sounds like she might enjoy adoptive parenting, well done Gretchen, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2022
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She definitely has found her niche with Waylon. Thank you so much for this awesome review. Gretchen
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She has indeed
Comment from damommy
Well, that's scary, coming home to find dead flowers on the doorstep. I think Miranda needs to be a bit more cautious. It's good she was able to resist Dougie's invitation.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Well, that's scary, coming home to find dead flowers on the doorstep. I think Miranda needs to be a bit more cautious. It's good she was able to resist Dougie's invitation.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Thank you. She's hoping that the flowers are from pissed off dougie. Not likely though. Thanks for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from lyenochka
Awww. Hooray for Miranda. She's turned into a caring mom for Waylon. Waylon has finally found an adult he can trust. And Dougie has to find someone else to use because Miranda grew out of being manipulated by the likes of him!
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Awww. Hooray for Miranda. She's turned into a caring mom for Waylon. Waylon has finally found an adult he can trust. And Dougie has to find someone else to use because Miranda grew out of being manipulated by the likes of him!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Dougie probably won't give up too easily. He's used to getting his way. Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Another great read. Good reading about lousy Dougy. He really has numbers on himself, doesn't he. Obvious what h really turned up for. Be interesting to see how Waylon gets on with his dad.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Another great read. Good reading about lousy Dougy. He really has numbers on himself, doesn't he. Obvious what h really turned up for. Be interesting to see how Waylon gets on with his dad.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2022
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Thank you. Dougie is the worst kind of guy. Self absorbed. Thank you for the gramd review and the extra star. Gretchen
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Probably a Narcissist! Dougy I mean.
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Yep.
