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Comment from karenina
Super duper Sonnet! Love that it's so contemporary with that sprinkling of a comedic envoi! Ah, romance...
It's subject to unwelcome tire tracks!
I'm not an expert, but it seems it's in fine iambic pentameter!
Congrats on giving this traditional form a fine modern day spin!
(Yup, anonymous, you got my vote!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Super duper Sonnet! Love that it's so contemporary with that sprinkling of a comedic envoi! Ah, romance...
It's subject to unwelcome tire tracks!
I'm not an expert, but it seems it's in fine iambic pentameter!
Congrats on giving this traditional form a fine modern day spin!
(Yup, anonymous, you got my vote!)
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Karenina, you are just so sweet and kind. I am so glad to see you back and if not for good yet, I hope that will be soon. Thank you for the lovely review, comments and for the gracious gift of six stars! I truly appreciate it my sweet friend!
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Well deserved!
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Comment from Rena Smith
Awwww, too cute and sweet. Sometimes, men just don't get it but God certainly did them a big favor putting women in their lives. He new they were going to need some helpmates. I enjoyed reading this sonnet, great job.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Awwww, too cute and sweet. Sometimes, men just don't get it but God certainly did them a big favor putting women in their lives. He new they were going to need some helpmates. I enjoyed reading this sonnet, great job.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Awe, thank you so much Rena, for such a kind review and words. My husband has so many other ways of showing me how much he loves me. So I couldn't be too upset that he didn't do this. However people sure got a kick out of the story. Thanks again for your wonderful review my fr
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, I can't imagine a husband who wouldn't take full credit for this and and let the chips fall where they may! You did, after all, lay a big fat kiss on him! A fun one with an unexpected jab at the end, and aptly illustrated. Six stars for your offering today and my very best with your entry!
Blessings to you all,
Sally Law, et al
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Wow, I can't imagine a husband who wouldn't take full credit for this and and let the chips fall where they may! You did, after all, lay a big fat kiss on him! A fun one with an unexpected jab at the end, and aptly illustrated. Six stars for your offering today and my very best with your entry!
Blessings to you all,
Sally Law, et al
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Oh Sally, I am so appreciative of your beautiful review, and lovely words for my sonnet. I thank you too for those gracious gift of six stars. You are so very sweet my dear friend! Thank you again!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Sonnets are rarely even amusing, but this is truly hilarious. The only thing I didn't like was the note, apart from the fact that it was a true story. Kate xx
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Sonnets are rarely even amusing, but this is truly hilarious. The only thing I didn't like was the note, apart from the fact that it was a true story. Kate xx
Comment Written 20-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Thank you Kate for your lovely words for my Sonnet. I appreciate your kindness and after giving your comments thought about the notes, I completely agree that it might have been more interesting to leave that part alone; at least for the sense of a little mystery. Thank you my dear friend for your very kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
A rare six stars from me. This is really clever. You must be a true romantic. I had to look at the picture a few times before I finally saw the image that you saw.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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A rare six stars from me. This is really clever. You must be a true romantic. I had to look at the picture a few times before I finally saw the image that you saw.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you Paul, for your kind words for my poem. Also for your gift of six star! They are so appreciated, my dear friend! In case we don't cross paths in the next few days, Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours! God Bless!
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Exceptional work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Raul, if you got any sweeter I would wrap you up and send you to someone for Valentines Day! Lol! You are such a special guy and I can't thank you enough for such kind comments and the lovely six stars! Thank you my wonderful friend, from the bottom of my heart!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
i liked this sonnet about love, marriage and wondering what your partner really feels and thinks, so many times, what is he or she really thinking at all what is in his or her heart .
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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i liked this sonnet about love, marriage and wondering what your partner really feels and thinks, so many times, what is he or she really thinking at all what is in his or her heart .
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Jake. The poor guy had no idea what I was so happy about. However I couldn't really be mad because he didn't do it. I think I have a pretty good idea how he feels after 48 years of marriage. Lol!
I sure appreciate your very kind review and comments my dear friend !
Comment from godlucifer
i guess for a minute there the morning look like two hearts as one. it takes two to tangle and one to love as lovers crouch to each other that morning. your poem was written with an outstanding effort. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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i guess for a minute there the morning look like two hearts as one. it takes two to tangle and one to love as lovers crouch to each other that morning. your poem was written with an outstanding effort. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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I thank you godlucifer. You are so kind, and. Yeah he is not big on that kind of caring but is a great guy and husband of 48 years and shows in other ways how much he loves me. I should have known that wasn't up his line of romance. But it was a nice few hours, at least thinking it was a possibility. Thanks again for the very kind comments, my dear friend.
Comment from Spitfire
A big laugh from me at the last line. Appropriate font that underscored the romantic feeling wife had toward hubby. I love that it is a true story. A well-done sonnet.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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A big laugh from me at the last line. Appropriate font that underscored the romantic feeling wife had toward hubby. I love that it is a true story. A well-done sonnet.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thanks Shari. He even tried to show me how it could happen with the front wheels and the back wheels, going back in the same direction. And I am like, are you an idiot? Every time you say it, it reminds me that you didn't do it. Lol! Anyway, everyone got a big kick out of it. What surprises me, is if that can happen so easily, then why don't we see it more often?? Oh well, it is what it is. If he really did It and didn't own up, and I find out in Heaven some day, I hope God gives me a permission to clobber him just once. Hahaha!!
Comment from nomi338
My firm belief is that he did it and is now pretending that he did not do it. I am the type of husband that would do this and allow you to wonder. I am willing to wager that he did do it. He may never admit it.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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My firm belief is that he did it and is now pretending that he did not do it. I am the type of husband that would do this and allow you to wonder. I am willing to wager that he did do it. He may never admit it.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thanks Nomi, He even tried to show me how it could happen with the front wheels and the back wheels, going back in the same direction. And I am like, are you an idiot? Every time you say it, it reminds me that you didn't do it. Lol! Anyway, everyone got a big kick out of it. What surprises me, is if that can happen so easily, then why don't we see it more often?? Oh well, it is what it is. But if it is like you say, If he really did It and didn't own up, and I find out in Heaven some day, I hope God gives me a permission to clobber him just once. Hahaha!!
Thanks my sweet friend for the kind review and comments!