Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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23 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your kyreille poetry. It is well written. Well done. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your kyreille poetry. It is well written. Well done. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Raul I do value your comments, thank you.
Comment from zanya
'Life, like nature leaves, many scars,' this is an interesting sentiment, upon which to ponder. A Kyrielle that provides material for reflection- a most enjoyable read
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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'Life, like nature leaves, many scars,' this is an interesting sentiment, upon which to ponder. A Kyrielle that provides material for reflection- a most enjoyable read
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Zanya, thanks for he review and comments.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully written, vividly descriptive poem conveys a delightful message about the contrast of a summer's day--the heat in the air, the coolness of the water in the stream and that provided by the shades.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Your skillfully written, vividly descriptive poem conveys a delightful message about the contrast of a summer's day--the heat in the air, the coolness of the water in the stream and that provided by the shades.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
you nailed the form my dear with great skill. I am envious of those people who can nail traditional verse. i have a problem with traditional verse forms except for Haiku which for some reason I can handle.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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you nailed the form my dear with great skill. I am envious of those people who can nail traditional verse. i have a problem with traditional verse forms except for Haiku which for some reason I can handle.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you! I struggle with Haiku, so kudo's to you!
Comment from royowen
This Kyrielle is different from any kyrielle that I've read, but looking at the rules it's still fine, but it resembles a sort of cascade poem, the rhyming is also unusual with an aaab routine, but beautifully written, an excellent post, and entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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This Kyrielle is different from any kyrielle that I've read, but looking at the rules it's still fine, but it resembles a sort of cascade poem, the rhyming is also unusual with an aaab routine, but beautifully written, an excellent post, and entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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thank you Roy!
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Most welcome
Comment from JoannaN
Hello, your Kyrielle made me check your poem line by line by searching for repeating lines (don't worry, everything is fine :) ).
Your poem is so reflective, you begin with a calm image of a river, to increase tension in the next lines. I wish you all the best in your contest.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Hello, your Kyrielle made me check your poem line by line by searching for repeating lines (don't worry, everything is fine :) ).
Your poem is so reflective, you begin with a calm image of a river, to increase tension in the next lines. I wish you all the best in your contest.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your validation.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. Yes, we live in a fast pasted world. I agree we need to slow everything down. I think we were better off back in the olden days when life was slower.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. Yes, we live in a fast pasted world. I agree we need to slow everything down. I think we were better off back in the olden days when life was slower.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Smiles harken such great times had as we reflect in wonderment of times gone by.
Comment from Eternal Muse
This poem has amazing visuals. Your words carry us to a special place where dreams come true, where beauty rules and everything is possible. I like the philosophical undertones and the wisdom of your words.
Enjoyed the imagery and presentation.
A lovely Kyrielle.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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This poem has amazing visuals. Your words carry us to a special place where dreams come true, where beauty rules and everything is possible. I like the philosophical undertones and the wisdom of your words.
Enjoyed the imagery and presentation.
A lovely Kyrielle.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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I appreciate your compliment! Thank you.
Comment from Fleedleflump
It does seem sometimes as though we spend our time waiting for events to come along instead of doing other things in between. I love the thoughtful tone of poem - it felt peaceful as I was reading it.
Mike
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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It does seem sometimes as though we spend our time waiting for events to come along instead of doing other things in between. I love the thoughtful tone of poem - it felt peaceful as I was reading it.
Mike
Comment Written 12-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and comments.
Comment from karenina
This is an elegant form and you've done it justice! Nature is, as most of us agree, a wonderful thing. Yet, it blossoms, flourishes, fades, and dies ~ as do we all. To sit a spell and take it all in? That is the essence of life! Storms will come and go, as will triumphs. We must weather both with grace and faith!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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This is an elegant form and you've done it justice! Nature is, as most of us agree, a wonderful thing. Yet, it blossoms, flourishes, fades, and dies ~ as do we all. To sit a spell and take it all in? That is the essence of life! Storms will come and go, as will triumphs. We must weather both with grace and faith!
Karenina
Comment Written 11-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2022
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Yes, how wonderful that like the ebb and flow of the tides our lives are in constant give and take.
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We appreciate the one, because of the other, I think!