The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Truth about Missy (Miranda)"Miranda solves a mystery.
13 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Oh, boy, a cat fight. A little hair pulling and eye gouging as they roll around the ground, screaming and yelling bad names at each other. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Oh, boy, a cat fight. A little hair pulling and eye gouging as they roll around the ground, screaming and yelling bad names at each other. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Think redneck Peyton Place. LOL. I think Miranda is more comfortable verbally slaying someone. But odds are she could probably hold her own in a physical fight. Thanks for the humorous review.
Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Damn you, Gretchen! You can't end the freaking chapter there; that's just cruel.
I have been Team Miranda since Day One, so I trust her instincts about Missy one hundred percent, and I am so hoping she gets proved right. First, though, I want to see her lump Missy!! (That ought to endear her to Waylon, big time!!)
Anyway, I'll be on FS overtime waiting for the next chapter. (And I'm sorry I've run out of sixes already; this is CERTAINLY worthy!!) x0
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Damn you, Gretchen! You can't end the freaking chapter there; that's just cruel.
I have been Team Miranda since Day One, so I trust her instincts about Missy one hundred percent, and I am so hoping she gets proved right. First, though, I want to see her lump Missy!! (That ought to endear her to Waylon, big time!!)
Anyway, I'll be on FS overtime waiting for the next chapter. (And I'm sorry I've run out of sixes already; this is CERTAINLY worthy!!) x0
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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No six necessary but always appreciated. I'll probably post this weekend. Work week from hell this week. Thanks for this review and comments.
Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
I am so much enjoying these stories, and already am looking forward to seeing how this transpires! The characters are all real-life, and interesting. Your writing is excellent.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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I am so much enjoying these stories, and already am looking forward to seeing how this transpires! The characters are all real-life, and interesting. Your writing is excellent.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2022
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Thank you. I kind of feel like I'm writing a redneck Peyton Place. Lol. Thank you for the encouraging review. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to read about Missy and Miranda. You've set this up very well. I agree with Miranda I think Missy is guilty. It sounds to set up for me. I don't agree with accidents just happen. Good writing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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I can't wait to read about Missy and Miranda. You've set this up very well. I agree with Miranda I think Missy is guilty. It sounds to set up for me. I don't agree with accidents just happen. Good writing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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I dont think Aaron did anything wrong he just used poor judgement. Lol. Thank you for your review and comments.
Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
That's one way to get Waylon's attention. It will make Miranda more humane in his eyes. Maybe I should say more interesting.
I believe Miranda can hold her own with Missy Toblerone. I'm with Waylon, This is gonna be good! Marinda is the come-back queen in your book. LOL, Well done, Gretchen. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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That's one way to get Waylon's attention. It will make Miranda more humane in his eyes. Maybe I should say more interesting.
I believe Miranda can hold her own with Missy Toblerone. I'm with Waylon, This is gonna be good! Marinda is the come-back queen in your book. LOL, Well done, Gretchen. Nancy:)
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much, Nancy. I truly appreciate your stellar rating and the encouragement. Gretchen
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Apart from giving us a foretaste of this chapter in the 'story so far' paragraph, that section is starting to work well now. It certainly makes things easier to follow.
This Chapter is easy to read and the dialogue pushes the pace along well. Miranda seems to hate/bear grudges against a lot of people. I hope she's not going to turn out to be negative for negative's sake. Kate xx
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Apart from giving us a foretaste of this chapter in the 'story so far' paragraph, that section is starting to work well now. It certainly makes things easier to follow.
This Chapter is easy to read and the dialogue pushes the pace along well. Miranda seems to hate/bear grudges against a lot of people. I hope she's not going to turn out to be negative for negative's sake. Kate xx
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Miranda is of a suspicious nature. If she trusts you, you're good. Otherwise, look out. Lol. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Wow! Some extra reviewing on the same day. This is priceless. So glad you got this up for a further lookie. Can't wait to see where it is all gonna end up. Good thing is...no spags. Keep it coming!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Wow! Some extra reviewing on the same day. This is priceless. So glad you got this up for a further lookie. Can't wait to see where it is all gonna end up. Good thing is...no spags. Keep it coming!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much for your continued support and the stellar review. Gretchen
Comment from lyenochka
Oh dear! So that's why Aaron asked Miranda and not any other neighbor. Missy probably asked Aaron to bring Miranda and has something planned...Hope Miranda is one step ahead of her.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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Oh dear! So that's why Aaron asked Miranda and not any other neighbor. Missy probably asked Aaron to bring Miranda and has something planned...Hope Miranda is one step ahead of her.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2022
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I think Aaron just used poor judgement. He will learn from that mistake. Lol. Thanks so much for your kind review. Gretchen
Comment from Dr. Von
This chapter is well-written. The storyline engages the reader through the use of conversation that puts flesh on the characters while strengthening the bones of the story. This is good work. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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This chapter is well-written. The storyline engages the reader through the use of conversation that puts flesh on the characters while strengthening the bones of the story. This is good work. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful review. I appreciate your words.
Gretchen
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You are welcome
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a most exciting story. I read some of the previous chapters and was glad to find this continence of the story. I'm anxious to see the next chapter and find our where you are going with this. It's getting very interesting.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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This is a most exciting story. I read some of the previous chapters and was glad to find this continence of the story. I'm anxious to see the next chapter and find our where you are going with this. It's getting very interesting.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
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Well, thank you very much. I do appreciate your sticking with me on this. Thanks for your comments and the time you took to read and review. Gretchen
