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Reeling In The Words

Short essay about Why I Write. (499 words)

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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A very good reason to write. It is kind of like reeling in a fish, whether it is small or big object depends on the nature of your imagination. I love to write, also, so I know exactly how important it is for our mental ability.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022

Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Lisa,
You've mostly said what I feel about writing, only you've said it so much more eloquently.
I'm bookcasing this work, so when I get writer's block--if there is such a thing--(every idea has potential), I can get some inspiration.

Congratulations on your first place, Lisa.
It is much deserved.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the Why I Write writing prompt contest. Good form. You followed the rules of the contest well.

Writing is a good way to get your feelings on paper and out of your mind.

We all have stories to tell and fanstory is the perfect place for it.

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from Bill Schott
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This essay, Reeling in the Words, has a boat-load of metaphors. Also, the inset rhyme-a-thon explanation is a fun-run for the uni-verse.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from in777wr#
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This was very interesting. You gave many reasons why you write. I really liked "The fish are biting." I have never thought about writing ideas like that. I will remember that. Your first few paragraphs rhymed nicely, and your story was told well. Nice job.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from Tom Horonzy
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My stories and poems become a record of my time on Earth.
I do it primarily for my own entertainment, or in the hope it will add something to another's day.
These two thoughts greatly describe my why as well. Nice essay.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from Wendy G
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This is extremely well written, and very clever with its poetic parts in the middle, and its touch of humour, along with the obvious passion for writing and the desire to do it well. The image of reeling in the fish is perfect. Writing, like fishing does provide sustenance as a creative outlet, and knowing how to fish/write well does make one richer forever. Your thoughts echo mine perfectly - we are on the same page for sure. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from lyenochka
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So artistically expressed! Loved reading your poetic prose! And I'm glad you're here sharing and honing your craft as you explore a variety of expression and get to know our international members! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a well-reasoned analysis of one person's relationship with writing. I find it interesting that the author likens writing to an essentially solitary sport (fishing).

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
    Thanks for your comments. I've used a fishing metaphor because writing feels relevant to this saying which I have always thought very wise: ''If you give a man a fish, he will be hungry tomorrow. If you teach a man to fish, he will be richer forever.''
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Writer,

I really enjoyed the metaphor of writing as a fishing excursion. It can certainly be so appropriate to that!!

This piece was well-written and entertaining. So relatable. I appreciate your time! Good luck!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
    Thanks Robyn!