Proceed With Full Faith In GOD!
Try time and again until you achieve your aim.36 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem has good flow, good rhymes, and a great message. The image is a great pairing with your well thought out words, too. I enjoyed reading your well constructed poem. You give readers much to think about. I like the quote in the notes.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Your poem has good flow, good rhymes, and a great message. The image is a great pairing with your well thought out words, too. I enjoyed reading your well constructed poem. You give readers much to think about. I like the quote in the notes.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello Jan,
Thank you very much for your so lovely, UPLIFTING comments, and
Exceptional Rating backed by Transparently Veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem tells us using some biblical adages that we should always keep trying to get to our dreams and let faith lead us.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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This poem tells us using some biblical adages that we should always keep trying to get to our dreams and let faith lead us.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello Joan,
Thank you very much for your UPLIFTING comments and Excellent Rating backed by Good Wishes plus Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are most kindly welcome on all accounts, RP.
Joan
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So nice of you, John.
Comment from Tina Crute
I like your lion-colored poem of courage by using your whole heart when stepping forward to challenges. Your author's note about using your whole heart would work well incorporated into the poem, just an idea, because I love the "whole heart" idea! This is an encouraging and creative poem that any reader would respond to! I did!
Tina
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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I like your lion-colored poem of courage by using your whole heart when stepping forward to challenges. Your author's note about using your whole heart would work well incorporated into the poem, just an idea, because I love the "whole heart" idea! This is an encouraging and creative poem that any reader would respond to! I did!
Tina
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello Tina,
Thank you very much for your UPLIFTING comments and Excellent Rating backed by Good Wishes plus veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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I do wish you luck! I enjoyed:)
Tina
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So nice of you, Tina.
Comment from JLR
RP. The perfect faith presentation! Free will, mankind's greatest bane or boon. it simply depends on the climb a human viewing makes for cradle to grave. Faith can be for many try, try again, but never look back, always forward step by step by step to return once again at the end our a lifetime of trial and errors once again we return to the our creators warm embrace. Thanks for sharing your work, best of holiday wishes!
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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RP. The perfect faith presentation! Free will, mankind's greatest bane or boon. it simply depends on the climb a human viewing makes for cradle to grave. Faith can be for many try, try again, but never look back, always forward step by step by step to return once again at the end our a lifetime of trial and errors once again we return to the our creators warm embrace. Thanks for sharing your work, best of holiday wishes!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello JLR,
Thank you very much for your UPLIFTING comments and Excellent Rating backed by Good Wishes plus veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from RShipp
What an artful way of reinforcing the need for a person to continue striving, not looking at the 'falls' but realizing the 'falls' are part of moving forward.
Well done.
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What an artful way of reinforcing the need for a person to continue striving, not looking at the 'falls' but realizing the 'falls' are part of moving forward.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello RShipp,
Thank you very much for your UPLIFTING comments and Excellent Rating backed by Good Wishes plus veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully written, uplifting, and very descriptive of a spiritual, Biblical truth: God DOES help those who help themselves--and guides those who trust Him for guidance.
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Your poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully written, uplifting, and very descriptive of a spiritual, Biblical truth: God DOES help those who help themselves--and guides those who trust Him for guidance.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello Janice Canerdy,
Thank you very much for your UPLIFTING comments and Excellent Rating backed by Veiled Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
In the past I've often been marked down because of inexact or slant rhyme. I have no problem with it and use it often. I find it's more important to reinforce the message with smooth meter than force rhyme. I like the rhyming couplet form though it can often sound sing-song. You did well with it. It's also nice to read poetry that doesn't have a bunch of errors that distract from the theme. The personification in line 4 is very nice. Your message is clear and well developed. Cowboy
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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In the past I've often been marked down because of inexact or slant rhyme. I have no problem with it and use it often. I find it's more important to reinforce the message with smooth meter than force rhyme. I like the rhyming couplet form though it can often sound sing-song. You did well with it. It's also nice to read poetry that doesn't have a bunch of errors that distract from the theme. The personification in line 4 is very nice. Your message is clear and well developed. Cowboy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello Cowboy,
Thank you very much for your UPLIFTING comments and Excellent Rating backed by Good Wishes plus Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You're welcome. Keep the herd downwind. Cowboy
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So nice of you, Cowboy.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Rhaghuvir, I think this is one of the best writing I've ever read from you, and I really like your poem a lot. Yes, we can never give up so we'll have to get better all the time at what we do and how we treat others. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hi Rhaghuvir, I think this is one of the best writing I've ever read from you, and I really like your poem a lot. Yes, we can never give up so we'll have to get better all the time at what we do and how we treat others. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello Ulla,
Thank you very much for your so nice,UPLIFTING comments and EXCEPTIONAL Rating backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation, RP.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem
with effective images, rhyme,
and "time tested adages."
-I like the line about
shedding "murky shelves."
-That is a good idea and
helpful to our well being, too.
-A well written poem showing
your positive outlook of
"proceeding forward" and
always trying.
-Thanks for sharing it.
-I never thought to ask you
where you were an English lecturer.
-I was a H.S. English teacher
for 29 years.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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-Very nice image and
presentation, RP.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem
with effective images, rhyme,
and "time tested adages."
-I like the line about
shedding "murky shelves."
-That is a good idea and
helpful to our well being, too.
-A well written poem showing
your positive outlook of
"proceeding forward" and
always trying.
-Thanks for sharing it.
-I never thought to ask you
where you were an English lecturer.
-I was a H.S. English teacher
for 29 years.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello Pam,
Thank you very much for your so nice, detailed review, UPLIFTING comments and Excellent Rating backed by Good Wishes plus Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are very welcome, RP.
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So nice of you, Pam.
:)
Comment from Wendy G
Fine words in this poem. God certainly expects us to be active in our faith, and proactive in service, and perseverance is one of the characteristics we need, so it's all there in your poem! best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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Fine words in this poem. God certainly expects us to be active in our faith, and proactive in service, and perseverance is one of the characteristics we need, so it's all there in your poem! best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello Wendy G,
Thank you very much for your UPLIFTING comments and Excellent Rating backed by Best Wishes plus Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP