E Bunny
Will come hopping your way27 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Yes, as an adult, I am waiting for him too.
E Bunny was able to save his deliveries because of what was provided by nature- a mushroom and the wind.
So, the hope everyone had was not spoiled.
Your picture, font, colors, and rhyme are very nice.
Congratulations on your wins and good luck with your prompt poem.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Yes, as an adult, I am waiting for him too.
E Bunny was able to save his deliveries because of what was provided by nature- a mushroom and the wind.
So, the hope everyone had was not spoiled.
Your picture, font, colors, and rhyme are very nice.
Congratulations on your wins and good luck with your prompt poem.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thank you for this wonderful starry review...it's so appreciated. :)
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I really enjoyed your poem. It was imaginative and creative. Rhyming was very well done. Written well. I like the idea of the bunny delivering the eggs.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I really enjoyed your poem. It was imaginative and creative. Rhyming was very well done. Written well. I like the idea of the bunny delivering the eggs.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from nancyjam
Great job. This is adorable and a perfect entry in the Easter Poem For Children contest. Very lovely images that children will enjoy. Your rhyme and meter are great and will appeal to kids. He is a very clever bunny too, using a mushroom for an umbrella. What fun! I really enjoyed reading it.
Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Great job. This is adorable and a perfect entry in the Easter Poem For Children contest. Very lovely images that children will enjoy. Your rhyme and meter are great and will appeal to kids. He is a very clever bunny too, using a mushroom for an umbrella. What fun! I really enjoyed reading it.
Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for this exceptional review. It means a lot to me. :)
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my gosh, I love this poem!! It is perfect for little kids. It is fun, lighthearted, but show E Bunny overcoming obstacles. A very good read for littles. I love the artwork as well.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Oh my gosh, I love this poem!! It is perfect for little kids. It is fun, lighthearted, but show E Bunny overcoming obstacles. A very good read for littles. I love the artwork as well.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thanks for this great review. :)
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent poem celebrating Easter, even though there's a couple of weeks to go. This is written in the classical style of amazing grace, 8686 abc rhyme, and a skilful addition to my daily reading, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : To fill his Heart(')s desire.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This is an excellent poem celebrating Easter, even though there's a couple of weeks to go. This is written in the classical style of amazing grace, 8686 abc rhyme, and a skilful addition to my daily reading, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : To fill his Heart(')s desire.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a cute poem. It looks like it was from a little while ago. I liked reading it. It definitely has an Easter theme, and it definitely seems likely to appeal to children who can read.
One suggestion:
When he got home he was content
to warm up by the fire.
Eat lots of carrot cake and stew,
To fill his hearts desire.
I think you might want to change the period after fire to a comma. Otherwise it sounds like the reader needs to eat lots of carrot cake and stew.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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This is a cute poem. It looks like it was from a little while ago. I liked reading it. It definitely has an Easter theme, and it definitely seems likely to appeal to children who can read.
One suggestion:
When he got home he was content
to warm up by the fire.
Eat lots of carrot cake and stew,
To fill his hearts desire.
I think you might want to change the period after fire to a comma. Otherwise it sounds like the reader needs to eat lots of carrot cake and stew.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from Julie Helms
This is an adorable poem. I love how it tells a story including some tension... What if it rains?...that resolves in a humorous and satisfying way. I think children would love hearing this. Julie.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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This is an adorable poem. I love how it tells a story including some tension... What if it rains?...that resolves in a humorous and satisfying way. I think children would love hearing this. Julie.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from jessizero
You did a great job with the "Easter poem for children" prompt! It was a fun poem, and I liked your rhymes. I think any child would love this. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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You did a great job with the "Easter poem for children" prompt! It was a fun poem, and I liked your rhymes. I think any child would love this. Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thank you! This nice review means the world to me. :)
Comment from shelley kaye
Ebunny? sounds like an internet thing LOL
totally fun spring poem of spring baskets and coloured eggs
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley ð?¦?
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Ebunny? sounds like an internet thing LOL
totally fun spring poem of spring baskets and coloured eggs
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley ð?¦?
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thank you for such a great review. :)
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Not only is this a delightful poem for children to love, but I'm seeing it also as a children's book. You obviously have a talent here, have you thought of writing books for children? Lovely. Happy Easter.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Not only is this a delightful poem for children to love, but I'm seeing it also as a children's book. You obviously have a talent here, have you thought of writing books for children? Lovely. Happy Easter.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thank you for this terrific review. I would love to publish children's books someday...thanks again for your encouraging words. :)
