My Hero, Tweety Bird
A minute poem for the cartoon contest15 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Cute poem, well deserving of your win! I remember watching these cartoon characters on our black and white TV set. For a while, all the kids in our neighbourhood used to talk like Tweety Bird.
(I was confused about whether the bird was actually called Tweety Pie, because my dad often called me Sweetie Pie.)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Cute poem, well deserving of your win! I remember watching these cartoon characters on our black and white TV set. For a while, all the kids in our neighbourhood used to talk like Tweety Bird.
(I was confused about whether the bird was actually called Tweety Pie, because my dad often called me Sweetie Pie.)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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I?m so glad you could relate to this fun piece! Those days of black and white cartoons were memorable. Thank you for dropping by to share your insights.
Comment from Julie Sandy
Great entry for the competition, straight from the mouth of tweety.
I love the wording and rhyme very good.
Lots of fun too
Thank you for sharing
Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Great entry for the competition, straight from the mouth of tweety.
I love the wording and rhyme very good.
Lots of fun too
Thank you for sharing
Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Glad this fun little piece entertained you!
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this Minute Poem!! This is a well written verse and an excellent response to the cartoon prompt. I remember those vibrant cartoons and think you chose a good one to act as your theme/enhancement!! Well done and good luck!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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I love this Minute Poem!! This is a well written verse and an excellent response to the cartoon prompt. I remember those vibrant cartoons and think you chose a good one to act as your theme/enhancement!! Well done and good luck!!
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem. Tweety is one of my favourite cartoon characters too - he's cute but kinda mean!
I really like how you took on Tweety's persona and voice - a nice take on the writing prompt.
Nice use of alliteration and well presented also.
Good luck in the booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem. Tweety is one of my favourite cartoon characters too - he's cute but kinda mean!
I really like how you took on Tweety's persona and voice - a nice take on the writing prompt.
Nice use of alliteration and well presented also.
Good luck in the booth.
Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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So glad this brought back some fun memories!
Comment from QC Poet
Sylvester and Tweety Bird one of the lasting Mel Blanc cartoons I believe. It's amazing to also look back and see the violence and other indunendo associated with those cartoon series of our youth.
Perhaps it's also part of a households Elder Acceptance. I try to explain that hidden part to my grandkids as they reach the appropriate ages. Good Luck in the Cartoon Time Contest
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Sylvester and Tweety Bird one of the lasting Mel Blanc cartoons I believe. It's amazing to also look back and see the violence and other indunendo associated with those cartoon series of our youth.
Perhaps it's also part of a households Elder Acceptance. I try to explain that hidden part to my grandkids as they reach the appropriate ages. Good Luck in the Cartoon Time Contest
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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So glad this piece brought back some happy memories for you!
Comment from Wendy G
Oh yes, brings back memories, for sure! All his adventures, always just managing to get out of scrapes. A fun and humorous piece, well written with his voice> Good luck.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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Oh yes, brings back memories, for sure! All his adventures, always just managing to get out of scrapes. A fun and humorous piece, well written with his voice> Good luck.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2021
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So glad this piece brought back some happy memories for you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You get an A+--I mean a 6!--for this great minute poem. It is creatively conceived and skillfully composed, entertaining, and accurate in its imitation of Tweetie-talk!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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You get an A+--I mean a 6!--for this great minute poem. It is creatively conceived and skillfully composed, entertaining, and accurate in its imitation of Tweetie-talk!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Glad you enjoyed this fun little piece!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
I love your poem. Very nicely written. Tweety is my favourite also. I just love the way he talks so sweet. Love this I I taut I taw a puddy tat. I would miss this ugwy puss. He's just a wuss. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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I love your poem. Very nicely written. Tweety is my favourite also. I just love the way he talks so sweet. Love this I I taut I taw a puddy tat. I would miss this ugwy puss. He's just a wuss. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Very happy you liked this fun little piece! I enjoyed this romp into cartoon land...
Comment from LJbutterfly
This poem is absolutely delightful, humorous, and creative. I loved Tweety Bird. You have artistically captured his dialect (I don't know how you did it)and as I read, I could hear him. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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This poem is absolutely delightful, humorous, and creative. I loved Tweety Bird. You have artistically captured his dialect (I don't know how you did it)and as I read, I could hear him. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Very happy you liked this fun little piece! I enjoyed this romp into cartoon land...
Comment from Laurie Holding
Stellar work, and I thank you for my very enjoyable Monday coffee break! You've captured Tweety Bird's vernacular with this piece, and with fabulous accompanying artwork, you deserve to win this contest. I'll keep an eye out for you and vote when it's time. Good luck, and thanks for a light-hearted moment on a dreary winter day.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Stellar work, and I thank you for my very enjoyable Monday coffee break! You've captured Tweety Bird's vernacular with this piece, and with fabulous accompanying artwork, you deserve to win this contest. I'll keep an eye out for you and vote when it's time. Good luck, and thanks for a light-hearted moment on a dreary winter day.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2021
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Very happy you liked this fun little piece! I enjoyed this romp into cartoon land...